Can you continue this story please and is Awesome!?

I'm interested in seeing where this goes.

Dude I love tgis shit it made my dick hard I want more

No Louise being a bitch and no familiar being a submitive bitch.
That's a huge plus to me !

it's good

Awesome! Can't wait for more.

how about somehow reven getting in contact with the mandolorians and having them help tristain

Are you going to undate this?

Revan, or any Force-user for that matter, would considered a forced Force-bond to be an utter abomination. Most would immediately destroy it. Revan is cool enough that he would ask questions to find out why it was forced upon him. He would also feel it out to determine what it does, if anything. Once he hears that it is a master/slave bond he would destroy it. When he detects that it subverts and degrades the free will of the bearer to make him or her pliable and obedient, he would find out if Louise knew. If she did not, she would be spared. If she did, her head would roll.

Never forget that, as much as Revan is a Jedi Knight, he is also a Sith Lord. He has mastered and merged both paths to become something more. But, they are still there.

By the way, Revan did not die at the Foundry, he used his Fold Space to escape because the Foundry was destroyed so he had no reason to remain. Oh, and The Shadow of Revan expansion has been officially stated to be non-canon, so he is still alive somewhere doing who knows what.

Hell, maybe he entered the Force without dying in an attempt to bring balance directly.

This is...
I'm
Well
I like it
I really do
The only real preference I would have is having the Revan from The Old Republic, like in his 30s or 40s, whatever age he was
But your decision is final and I do like that too
Although
Do we get to see some Revan moments where he contemplates and has internal arguments with his dark and light sides?

Gotta say, o'm loving this

Nailed the reactions to Revan quite and with Isabella here, does that eman no Sheffield?

Super dope. Please continue.

Meh. Nothing about this really stands out from any other FoZ story so far. Neither terriable nor great story.

Okay dude I want to give a bit of advice I feel is important for you. Stop writing new stories and focus on the ones you've already written. Seriously I checked your profile and you have 37 stories none of them completed. I understand your a writer and have a lot of ideas, but everytime time you write a new story your dividing your focus on getting new chapters written for them along with new stories. This causes you to have long update times for all your stories. So I suggest you look over all the stories you've written, decide which ones you plan to continue, and stop writing new stories until you completed some.
But aside from that I'm really interested in this story and can't wait to see what you have in store for everyone.

interesting