I can't decide if this is adorable or creepy, so we'll played there I guess! :D

Adorable because it's Ruby fretting and trying to act more grown up than she is. Creepy because I have the suspicion that Cinder is playing with Ruby as part of her cover at Beacon. Thing is I can't quite tell if it's her being genuine or not haha

Either way I really enjoyed it :)

Oh my.

You know, this whole story really sounds like the classic tragic story where the naive girl falls for an evil bastard. Cinder calling her "pet" kinda compounds that. I like it, though maybe you could've ramped up the creepy implications a bit more.

Well, well, soldier...

Mmmhmm~! Ohhh my, this little story here was lovely! *O*

Your words, the way that you describe what Ruby feels for Cinder, dem descriptions...(Whistles) It really, easily gets across the message that what Ruby feels for Cinder is -the- real deal, the love of adults. It's so very giggle-inducing as it is bittersweet. X3

And then, of course, the meeting, Ruby giving Cinder her birthday present...*O* Wow~ So very sweet and surprisingly...well...kinda sensual. Dayum~

Great work, Marine!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

A very nicely written piece.

That's...actually very sweet and I love it. It brings up some interesting fringe idea's, this appears to be canon verse, so the idea of Ruby loving Cinder so much, who's currently the big bad, is almost disturbing in a very good way. Any further and you'd probably ruin how sweet this is, but it's interesting to think about how this would evolve, first time having sex, when Cinder would tell Ruby what, how much, and whether Ruby would ultimately side with Cinder or not. Yang is interesting to, how much does she know and her ultimate reactions, even to just Ruby is dating an older woman much less the rest. Whatever, I'm thinking to deep on a sweet nice little story.

YES. GODS BLESS YOU YES.
OH MY GOD YES.
CINDER RUBY IS SO PERFECT

Well written, enjoyable sensual but fluffy read, great work!

Aww. That's pretty adorable.