I had great expectations for this story. Don't know why. I just did. Well, I was highly disappointed. The writing is off. Didn't have to flesh out his history in a sudden fashion. Then making Brandon HEAT the brother of Meryl? Dude... Really, this story could've been better. Like, in more capable hands of a person that respects the source materials. Jeezuz, this story...

Dammit, its been so long since i read this, I've gotta reread it all over again.

Uhhh...Is that suppose to be Grave/Brandon Heat? Coz...it sounds almost nothing like him..But pretty good story

Nice fanfic. All the characters seem in... well character. Hope you can write some more. _

yea... i dont get the story... its weird. no offense meant, it made no sense...
neko

that is a rellyfricken good story

I love this story. But when are you going to update? I've been reading the same chapters for 10 months now and I'm waiting to find out what happens. Will Grave face Vash the stampede? Will Meryle discover that the 14th gun-ho-gun is her deceased brother? Does it have a happy ending? Or is it one of those fanfics that will never be finished and will drive the reader to insanity because they never find out what happens in the ending? You had better finish this fanfic. I want to know what happens next

Interesting story and I love it. Slight nitpick: you could move your rating up to PG. No big deal if you don't, but doing so might be a wise move.

UPDATE!

Will you ever update? Im waiting...

Heh, me back! Grave pinched the cat! Oh well, s'not like anyone has laid claim to it! lol, I liked Vash and Nick quiping at each other briefly at the begining of this chapter. I always thought they were funny in the series! Keep it up, and update soon!

Luv Jessie Chibi-Vash

A crossover between my favorite videogame (Gungrave) and my favorite Anime (Trigun) along with an eyecatching and cool plot... MY FRIEND YOU MUST CONTINUE THIS AWESOME FIC! I'm hanging on to every word spoken in this story. plz continue writing.

... *finally pulls herself out of trance* WOW! WOW! *twitches and grins like an idiot* This was SO kewl! Please continue soon! Um.. me gives you sugar if yas do!

Luv Jessie Chibi-Vash

I'm too lazy to sign in, well anyways, dude, this story is sweet! Keep it up! I like how you described Legato as vampiric, I would have never thought that! Well, good luck on your writings!

I. Am. Confused.

Gungrave is Meryl's brother? And just WHEN is this set? During, before or after Vash gets his final showdown with Knives?

Huh...never knew plants had that aability...kinda makes Vash's non-killing vow a little redundant ne? oh well, continue, so afr, Gungrave sounds like a demented vampire who yells his attacks to confuse ppl, but still intriguing.