Lexa is stupid as fuck. Did she really think once the mountain men were able to go to the ground they’d no bomb their people and take the land?! So short sighted. Those grounders didn’t do shit. She didn’t save them. Skaikru did. What a weak ass commander. Running away like a scared bitch. And the skaikru still cute their reapers. Greedy ass fucking grounders. Ungrateful too.

Wow need more

I loved this story. Clarke as a badass, yes indeed!

Nice story i had fun reading this
Im confused if these is the end or not though
Anyway keep on writing

I look forward to it :) And I'm just saying, but Lexa would be lucky to have Death as her partner, cause who would really want to go against the commander whose love is Death? The legend! Ice Nation bitch would shit her pants.
I school and work are kind on your time and allow you to update soon.

Did Clarke die? I am assuming she did but I wasn't sure

This story is amazing!

Awww, why finish this ?! I loved it! You could have continued on when she returned to Camp Jaha/met with Lexa again or something! :(

awesome

Love it!
I hope you continue.

Ooooh. I rather like this version of events! Seems a bit kinder than the alternative.

I thought everyone was very in character and the whole thing was easily believable.

Fantastic job Love. If you do continue it, I would happily read and eagerly await it.

Very exciting story so far. There are some problems here with verb tense, you switch between past and present, punctuation, and paragraph usage. A good beta reader, or just another pair of eyes could help you catch all of those and make your writing even better. I'm going to keep reading. Thanks for posting.

I love it! This is one of my favorite fics :D

loves itt

Hellz yes! Just so epic.
Eh with this story, and how fast you were pumping it out, I concentrated mostly on the story not the writing. The writing was still good though. It's mostly your story is fucking epic, and I want more!
Please?