this was an interesting chapter

my only complaint is the switching of POVs and not having ANY indication of it having happened until I figured it out.

Any word on when this story will be finished? Are you working on it or is RL being messy?

Please please please finish this story. Has such emotional moments in it and its cute to see the relationship in this setup with all the challenges

Wellp, it's been a long time and I finally came back and re-read the story, this time to the end. It saddens me to see that the story seems to have been abandoned. It had great potential. I hope that you're ok out there and that you will come back to this story someday. I'll be checking regularly.

- Cheers, Alpaca

... I was actually looking for a story like this, where Hiccup gets controlled by the Red Death, I actually had the same idea, but I am probably going to go in a different direction with mine, where Hiccup remembers his actions as well as who he is afterwards, and it will focus on him getting over the things he did, but I wanted to see where yours went with it, and I really like it. Please either update soon or let us know this fic is abandoned, I hate when a fic sits for years where you never know if its going to update or not.

can you please identify where the p.o.v changes it makes the story hard to read

God I really love this story I just recently started reading httyd fanfic but so far this is the best one I found I really hope you update it soon again. Awsome e job

I’m so glad this story is still going, I stumbled across it a couple years ago but lost it. So happy to finally find it again!

I’m not a writer but I’ll check out the website you posted. Hope job things & life things are going well!

Thanks for the update chapter was nice. Also glad that you have a boyfriend now hope that that go great for you. Sorry about the job thing. I hope you resolve that soon, even with you new project idea or finding a new job. Well I not a writer so I can't help you with that, but I wish you good luck on that. Until next one and thanks

My uh friend, thanks you for the info. *eyes shift from left to right* totally my friend. And great chapter as always! I really loved it.

Awesome update.

Astrid and Hiccup are pretty stupid if you think about it. Is his leg ever going to heal? Please tell me that with all his traveling Hiccup has been with a female before?

I second the motion it is time for Hiccup and Astrid together

Don't put off the unavoidable Hiccup ;) :P Although... Astrid leaving? Interesting...
Also potato peeler, yay :P

what happens next?