Gah! It went from angst to cute so quick. Totally loved it!

AWWWWWWW

Your an amazing writer! It's like you smack the reader with vivid images and emotions and I loved it. (I was sobbing at the thought of Xibalba going through so much pain. Then again, when he was with his daughter.)

Awwww, what a sweet story. I love Xibalba and his daughter, Marigold, their relationship reminds me of Dracula and Mavis from Hotel transylvania but you managed to make it so adorably sweet! :)

I love your fanfic's! Keep up the good work!

Will you please stop doing this. You're making me cry again. And please update more on the other stories. But that was a good point if that happen to Marigold. I would be so sad for Xibalba and I won't stop crying for that.

Omg soooo cute! (And sad too, gasp!) Poor Xibalba, all the horrible things he had to go through and then on top of that he had that horrible dream! I'm glad he has Marigold too keep him sane. And Marigold has him to always protect her, that's adorable. And omg i think we need to see more stories of when La Muerte and Xibalba were children and played together and when they started to realize they had feelings for each other!