This was AMAZING please continue!

Very good

Ok, so the story idea was good. You wrote well. I appreciate a good writer. But I have one question. Why in the world did you rate that K? That was at the very least a T story, and it is well to rate them accurately, so people don't get more than they bargain for. It would have been OK to mention mating a bit, it was necessary for the story. But the detailed description was unnecessary, made it so the story should have been rated for much older readers, and frankly, it was uncomfortable to a person expecting a story for Kids.

Omgosh. I love love love this. This was so sweet and perfect. We need more Croods Fanfics like this. 333 :D

You don't have idea how I love you

At first I was under the impression that this would be some kind of cat fight between "Lump" and Eep over Guy. However it was actually really enjoyable to read, even though some of it seems a bit outlandish and doesn't hold fast to the true Croods tale. A lot of it did though, especially the humorous parts. "... like a well oiled machine. Whatever that was. He'd have to invent some time in the future." or "... since the first time I laid eyes on you and you beat me up and took my fire." Died. I died right there. It was seriously funny to me for whatever reason. Great job, again. If you wanted to make some kind of follow up, or even just another fic. you aren't half bad at it. ;) - KayLynJay

aHHHAAAhH! TO CUTE !XD CX D C THIS made me want to cry fror how fluffy cute it was! I LOVVEE IIIT! THANK YOUUUU for creating such cute fluff! SOOO CUTEE!

love it!

Incredibly well written!