This was certainly an awesome chapter with the action, explosions, and twists.

This, I guess Book, seems to be at its end, but a possibility for the next chapter in the saga seems to be hinted, which I'll be looking forward to if/when it comes to fruition.

Anyways, I'll be looking forward to what you'll come up with next. Semper Fi - The Constitutionalist -

gah! that...Was...AWESOME! I love it! we have new characters coming in, kora beat slendy, saved chris, kuri and sin, seje beat centinel and adam helped seje! so awesome! I cant wait for book 2 ur the best seje! thanks for updating

Sorry I didn't review this until now. This was an interesting section, although it made me think of Psycho Mantis from the Metal Gear series, although Psychokinetic powers aren't really magic and he could read your memories (PS1 Memory Card) and Move your Controller (Rumble).

Anyways, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. Semper Fi - The Constitutionalist -

Hiii Sejeeee! Long Time No Talk! Hehe It Was A Very Good Chapter! It Took Me By Surprise, I Thought It Was For A Second A New Bad Guy Hehe But Well When Ur Name Appeared I Was Like OMG! And Its So Awesome! xD Hehe Anyway Hows Life?

Come on, let's all cheer them on! Let's go Kora, let's go, let's go Seje, let's go, let's go Adem, let's go!

When you said 'and WTF? moments' I instantly thought of a funny TV show called Wheels That Fail, or WTF for short hahaha :P

This was a pretty awesome action-y chapter. The Sentinel seems like a very dangerous foe, I wonder how much so.

Anyways, hopefully your comp is all good now, viruses suck. Semper Fi - The Constitutionalist -

OMG SEJEEEEEE! I MISSED YOUUUUUU heheh I love it! *shivers* though slendy scared the s*** out of me hehe *wipes tear away* I really missed u! And I miss chrisss!

So we have a new friend/robot! Hehe I like him :D ill call him Robbie-chan! Hehe :3 thank u for updating seje! I kinda missed the story hehe

Nearing the end will you kill Giovanni by going quick and painless or long and painful

This was certainly an interesting and creepy chapter. I wonder how both the Game and the Lilycove Base happenings with what's going on.

Anyways, this was a good chapter, it's good to see the update, and by the responses, it'll be intriguing next chapter [lol]. Semper Fi - The Constitutionalist -

O.O I almost screamed when he appeared, hehe I honestly hate him! He is very scary hehe, and yeah I guess we will have to wait xD heheheh I finally snapped Raph, Alex and Johnny from their creepiness, and they sulked for a long time after hehe heck Alex is still sulking. Anyway, it was an awesome chappy, and poor Adam! Hehehe please update soon!

*GASPS*! why! XD hehehehhehe ok I understand seje! 3 dont worry D its actually better that way cuz u can plan the next few chapters for each story too Ill help! D sooooooo you can count on me for anything u need 3 and as for my taboo fantasy, well Ill explain to you later! 3 hehehehehehehheheh

*Creepypasta Alex and Johnny appear from behind me and start dragging me backwards to the dark corner* Oh no! Not again! Why!
*disappears into the black corner*

*screams* SLENDERMAN! *hides behind Raph again*

Raph Use flamethrower! *Raph flamethrowed Slenderman but it didnt do anything and he disppears with Raph*

RAPH!

Oh no, Ohhhhh nooo! Its worse when I dont see him! No,no,no,no,no,no *Panicking and running in circles, then stops and runs towards the camera*

Sejeeeee! It was an awesome chappy! But now slenderman is stalking me! Help! *shivers and slenderman appears just behind her and grabs her with his tentacles*

Kyaaaaaa! Let me goooo! Noooooo! *being dragged towards the dark*

Seje! Avenge me! *her scream echoes and she disappears into the darkness...
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*Ro runs in* Ooooooh a camera! Hiiiiiii do u know where Tanner is?...
...oh wait wrong story byeeeeeeee! *runs off*

This was a pretty interesting chapter, Seje regrouping everyone, only for the strange laptop to become a portal for Kuri, Chris and Sin to be transported into its programming...

It seems like Seje and Kora will have to save the others from the laptop, I wonder how that'll go down.

Anyways, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. Semper Fi - The Constitutionalist -

I have to say that after reading this, I'm hooked on this now, and I'm liking all the references, this is a joy to read.

I'm liking the plot to destroy Team Neo as Arceus has given the heroes powers and dubbed them Guardians.

Anyways, I'll Follow and Favorite this so I can keep up with another of your stories, and if you're open to another OC, PM me with the requirements and I'll come up with one. Semper Fi - The Constitutionalist -