When I started reading this I never expected to become this attached... The tension was so well described all the time and you really took the time to make us see the progress in Katniss’s and Peeta’s relationship! Love it! Thank you for creating a fanfic where their relationship isn’t perfect to start with :)

Good story. Thanks for sharing!

Great story. Life is a mess. People are a mess. But there's still love and happiness to be found and I think a Shot in the Dark portrayed that really well :)

Your story was amazing, beautiful, moving, poetic. Thank you so much, really. I am speechless.

Katniss needs to grow up and get over herself. One minute, she's upset that Peeta is flip-flopping between being too friendly and being professional, then she's angry that he regrets kissing her even though she also said "we shouldn't have" just seconds before. And she has the gall to present her and Peeta as being equally at fault for their massive argument and their break up, when she's the one the the one that's constantly turning everything into an argument because she can't handle being told she was partially responsible, and when she's the one ran off and completely cut off all communication both times?

Well I guess this story has been left at a good point, so I shall not complain lol. Interesting seeing Johanna and Thom paired together.

wow- that was simply beautiful - no other words to describe it!

So fast it seems like Peeta is perfect and katniss is unreasonable. I don't see any good qualities in her so I'm really hating her as a character.

Awesome story! I loved it :)

Fun story! I enjoyed reading it very much.

I told myself I was only going to read a little bit of this once I found out that she and Peeta had already been together and broke up. I've never read a fic about a past couple getting back together and didn't think I wanted to. But a little bit became a little more, and then Katniss was going for the modeling job. And before I knew it Peeta walked up and at some point I realized I was at the end of the chapter and hitting next. I'd say that a job well done on your part.

There were a couple of times you had repeated words or one word in the wrong place. But it wasn't excessive. You can easily fix some like that by rereading your chapters after letting them sit for an hour or so and not looking at them. I've found it's best to get away from your writing for a while before editing. As if you edit too soon you end up reading it the way you meant to write it and not the way it's actually written.

I just found this story and fell in love with it.
It was absolutely wonderful, and can't wait to check out your other stories! As well as whatever your write for us in the future!

This was such an amazing and cute story! You are a great writer!

Such a good story!

Loved this! Thank you for a wonderful Story. I'm hoping to see another one from you soon :D