Where did you go. I need more of your story. Please, Please, Please!

Yes crying women are always pain. I know I am whenever I have occasion to start blubbering. And I ABSOLUTELY HATE crying, so there's that. I wonder what fix he'll come up with to keep his screwy sister off his case?

I honestly find myself hoping that Menma will manage to find some way of torturing Sasuke into obediance if not being a better person.

It seems like your either missing some scenes or line skips because it went from menma and Ludhiana talking to him and mebuki talking about Sakura, and then straight to him walking through a dark hallway to meet the kyuubi. It kinda messed me up a bit, other than that great chapter.

Danzo is a fool who only seeks to manipulate through assassination and mind control (Shisui's eye). As Menma, Naruto can turn enemies into chess pieces.

I loved the chapter! very good chapter! looking forward to the next chapter!

ps: using google translator to comment!

TigrezzTail The number is not off, the whole point of operation Divination was the removal of all the corrupt and manipulative people in Konoha, leading to a high number of death and execution. But as I mention, many of the bloodline clans from Kiri are joining Konoha, a rough number of 30.000 shinobi and 12 to 17.000 civilians. I know the high death toll might feel like I am trying to give Naruto, now Menma, an outlet for killing... but in future chapters I will explain the necessity of it.

I think you rnumber of dead is wrong. You stated previously that there are only 57,000 & 45,000 between the civilian and shinobi in the village. That's 113,000 which after 70,000 dead would leave 43,000, less than half the village alive. Or is that accurate? I'm glad we got to see how it went down. Although I never expected the Hyuuga of such shamefulness. I wonder why it was the Uchiha never targeted them. Or was it because they kept their guard up?

Yup. You lost me when you gender bent the characters. Great quality English, just by far isn't my kind of story.

So we finally get to see some of what he has been working on! And fruitfully so it seems. Heh, bet the other villages are pulling their hair out when the results become obvious even to outsiders.

Might I ask how in the hell this is a Naruto FanFiction?

I wasn't really sure how I'd feel about your story from the description. But it has been absolutely fascinating! I've really enjoyed every minute I spent reading it. I definitely want to find out what resulted from his 'operations'. Many things must have changed for the village.

Okay, I'm going to gush for a moment. This was sooooo good! So many stories of some similarity almost always turn Naruto into a flat, revenge-obsessed doll. He literally becomes a linear character with no flavor or depth; it infuriates me! But, you amazing writer you, have given him so much complexity, the story so much complexity with his plots and plans. You didn't answer everything or give all of the pieces to the reader early on and gave us somethings to ponder on, so many mysteries! One of my favorite stories of this category that I've read so far! I can't wait for the next update, and I say bravo to you, you deserve hundreds of reviews, follows, and favorites.

this is very interesting and I really love how Naruto has turned out in this.

LOVED it! :) :)