Hi there! I just read the Spanish translation of this story and I wanted to say thank you for give your permission. I really enjoyed it! You're a great author! Hope to read something more from you in the future. Greetings from México. *-*

This is incredible. I hope there will be future outtakes for them. It made me feel, so much. Thank you.

Can we please get a future take

This is really good.

Thank for sharing it :D

Yaaasss! Finally she grew some backbone! I hope she keeps it

Any chance of a future shot?

I wish all girls will learn that you can't sleep with a guy to keep him. If he wants to go then nothing will stop him

Will we get another chapter of his meeting her at Udub

Loved this story. The short chapters and heartfelt words. Felt very genuine. Would love to hear more if u have a chance. Thanks.

I just finished this story and I have to tell you I absolutely loved it. I really did. It was honest. High school is rough. And people are selfish and immature and growing up.

I would love a future take of these two. Just to see Bella's confidence shine through. She has come a long way. As has Edward.

Thank you for writing this beautiful story and sharing it.

I was really curious who/what the text was while in the lunch line. I figured it was a girl, not jasper teasing. Thanks!

All teenage girls should read this story. Actually doing what Bella did is easier said than done, but the message is inspirational. We all need to find our strengths. Thank you!

I wish you would add more on. I really would like to see what happen after coffee

I was trying to explain to my husband why I fell into this story so soundly and I think I've figured it out. It's great to see (and maybe vicariously rewrite history a bit with) a teenage girl who takes a high school player at face value and understands that it's him, his mindset, that is the problem, and not her.

That in itself is liberating, but when you extended it with the epov the story grew from a "girl gets burned fic" to a "one who got away" story. I love that. And honestly, I'd love to see them reconnect and have the story grow into a mature and balanced love story. I guess only time will tell, huh. *hint, hint* lol

Thank you for sharing this story with us. I'm normally not one for brief chapters, but you got me to not only break my "rule" but make me love the focused style.

Xoxo,
Mel

It's been great hearing Edward's pov, but what about their pseudo reunion at UDub? Surely there's something thought about how that meeting went? I'd love to hear about it and any future that these two might have. Thank you!