Great story! I hope you continue it!

This was cute

What a poor thing that you decided to discontinue this :( because I enjoy the story so much!

I love this Touya's POV and how you describe his feeling, just so awesome! I like that it's not all so angsty but you put comedy thing in a few parts too.

I really hope that you would continue, but...just keep spirit and good luck!

it is just amazing, thanks a lot for writing something like this :)

I liked the story prety much. Good work!

Hi :). I enjoyed this very much, your writing style is great, and so is the plot's multiple threads. Writing this from Touya's POV and focusing on what he should have felt after giving up his magic was the right choice; this makes the story stand out among the many Toya/Yuki I've read so far. Love it!

Oh wow! Oh yay! You really DO deserve an award, nya! XD Ganbarimasho!

I'm still waiting. You know that last part, the sentence, 'at leadt I still had yuki'.

I have a bad feeling that Yukito is going to leave him too.

I hope I'm wrong.

I read this story before, but I forgot to review _ I really enjoyed! The last chapter sounded like it could be the end, but does it still continue? :D I'd love to read your other stories, and I will when I finish.. homework

Joby

You wanna know if 'I still love you'.Well why don't we ask the twitching eye if I still love you.

2004? its been 3 years! update story! lol its so good so far!

I hate it when I come across something I really like but I manage to sound reduntant.

Fantastic work, your characterization of Touya is spot-on ( and very intimate, his fears about losing his sister and all) and believable. Character interactions are great (I loved Sakura teasing Touya about his age) and I really liked how you handled everything. And I mean everything.

Your portrayal of Touya and Yukito's relationsip is ... God help me with vocabulary, awesome. It's what it should be. It's not sugar-coated but it's real.

Excellent work, L-chan *thumbs up*!

Is this story being continued? Even on any other site?

this is such a good story! kepp it up! i can't wait to read more of it!

This story's really good. The characterization is almost flawless. I could almost see it leading to your story Shadows. It's really great that some of the things that were a bit blur at the beginning of Shadows due to the large gap from the end of CCS is all being cleared up with this story. It's really good that little by little, details about Touya's way of thinking and feelings are revealed. The change in him is not too drastic which what makes it all reasonably possible.

Although I would like to think that it would be nice to have something that would clear up Tomoyo's change of attitude towards Sakura in Shadows (She was a bit OOC there). But since this is a Touya centric fic and all is in Touya's POV, that is not highly likely to be included. But I do hope that more T/Y would be written next time. I'm really anxious to see how their relationship would turn out, good or bad. :)

Anyway, keep up the good work! I hope that you'd continue this. It's one story that I'll wait for to be updated. Update soon! :)