Ahhh so good!

love it please continue writing more soon.

Very good but it needs an ending

Great story so far!

I like reading how much Rose has changed, edges made a bit harder by her experience and responsibilities. The setting of Mass Effect fits in really well with Pete's World, I feel; that universe has much more advanced technologies after all.

Very original story so far! I like the crossover with Mass Effect. Some small grammatical and spelling errors (one in the summary, too), but a fantastic start.

Just started reading this story. Can't wait to see what's next!

I love how you're portraying Rose in this story.

It's not a bad story. But I will amint that a lot of it feels rushed.. And I'll try and explan why I feel that way. You have interduced a lot of OC's but you have given no background on any of them. And then Rose's family. you have given no info on them other then to say that they have died. And let's not forget the companions. Rory has barly said ten words. Amy isn't talking nearly enough. She should be acking qustions and not just exepting everything that is going on around her. And then there's River. Who well I am happy you have given a bit more screen time to. River should not just be coming to take her place. River is still a mostly human women. she should be julles. Hell Rose should be Julles of River. And lets not count the fact that you just aren't using the Doctors enough. they are mostly just standing atound doing nothing. At minamum thet should be asking the crew about Rose. like why she goes bt two nicknames. And what they mean.

Honestly you just need to slow your story down a bit and fill it out more.

So very excited that you are back...this story is so compelling and just draws you in...read it all again and hope you are able to post more.

Cute. I love the plot twist. Can't wait for more.

oh boy getting hairy lol I like it

oh I am intrigued of how this story is going. Please update your story.

please please update!

Please update this fantastic story.