Reviews for A Whole New Beginning |
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Realmsmith chapter 8 . 7/19/2019 WHY. WHY is dumbles ignoring harry, not WHAT is dumbles ignoring harry! |
Jestrbob chapter 6 . 6/14/2019 Moving away from canon? That is what makes it fan fiction, and not a rewrite. All good stories have a point of divergence. For me I take the end scene and write it then start working backwards so all the little points and major points of divergence pull the last scene together. It works well I have one small story, a short that is stalled out but still being finished. Three original story's almost done which will be self published on a fiction site. I write often while "playing with game radio". |
Guest chapter 4 . 12/11/2018 Well, I've been waiting and waiting for some change but so far, apart from talk, nothing has changed from the original story plot. Harry needs counselling and support of his friends. Dumbledore forces him to return to the Dursleys. Nobody writes him. Harry is kept in isolation instead of being supported and comforted. Dementors attack. Harry is angry and frustrated when he is finally dragged off to Grimmauld. Sounds familiar? Yes, exactly as the original except maybe way in the future. I give up about here. |
mudblood granger chapter 17 . 10/16/2018 oh no plese update I NEED MORE! |
Vegasman59 chapter 17 . 12/24/2017 Dumbass Dumbledore has had plenty of time to figure it out, he's stalling to keep his power possition. I'LL be reading! |
Vegasman59 chapter 16 . 12/24/2017 Hermione's folks are gone that's gonna enrage Harry no end! |
Vegasman59 chapter 15 . 12/24/2017 That was not Hermione's parents it had to be Polly Juiced Death Eater's. |
Vegasman59 chapter 14 . 12/24/2017 Ron is going to get jealous because of Draco's remarks about Hermione. |
Vegasman59 chapter 13 . 12/24/2017 Malfeasance senior isn't going to get anywhere with Moldy Shorts, he's concentrating on the prophecy. |
Vegasman59 chapter 12 . 12/24/2017 It's a happy Harry and Hermione after all that drama... LOL! I Love this! |
Vegasman59 chapter 11 . 12/24/2017 Oh Damnit, Fudge has Harry and isn't going for any kind of truth. |
Vegasman59 chapter 10 . 12/24/2017 Moldy isn't used to screaming In extreme pain, way to go Hermione! |
Vegasman59 chapter 9 . 12/24/2017 I couldn't resist a beautiful brilliant girl like Hermione |
Vegasman59 chapter 8 . 12/24/2017 Poor Hermione doesn't even know the question yet...of course her answer is yes to. |
Vegasman59 chapter 7 . 12/24/2017 Dumbass Dumbledore makes another big mistake. |