Very nice story and good writing. I wish you could compile some of your one shots into a multichapter. Thank you for sharing your talent with the world.

Sweet and sexy, thank you.

Love it! would've loved it if it wasn't a one-shot too...I like your writing style, keep up the fluff and smexiness.. XD

I liked the beginning but I felt that them getting to kissing and such was pretty rushed

Really good!

So cute :)

I absolutely loved this! I wish you'd carry on with this one instead of it just being a one shot. :)

That was wonderful, awesome and excellent, I loved it and nice job but I can't wait to read the next one so please update as soon as you can

Perfect amount of spice and fluff with wonderful writing and my favorite pairing: Narusasu! Thanks a bunch for posting!