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OMG! He called the cops! Yay!

... But what about the pack of catnip he had? ._. Hope hes not holding on to it! :c

Your story is good, it is developing a bit fast, but I find it charming. Don't let every bad comment take you down. Keep writing. If you do, you'll get better. As of the person who told you that your story was boring or something along that line, don't beat yourself over it. People can say whatever they want: it's not their story. They can go and choose to read something else if they want, you can keep doing what you love and most of us will appreciate it -

Personally, I think Vegeta's behaviour suits him. Not that everyone likes druggards (maybe that's why some of the reviewers may be upset), but hey! It keeps the story interesting xD I don't wanna read more "cookie-cutter" stories, so keep writing original ones to your heart content. The only thing that I don't like about this Vegeta is that he seems kinda more like a follower than a leader when being around his shady friends (makes me wanna smack him x'D) but I like the story so far, so keep it up! :)

Yes I want a lemon are you seriously asking this question right now!

I can't read this story anymore it may be well written but you have destroyed Vegeta's character I don't mean to flame but smoking and attempting suicide is something Vegeta would never do it just felt entirely unnecessary also yeah he might call Bulma a wench or a harpy but I don't think he would ever call her a "bitch" or "whore" I really wish you wrote this story with all oc's or explained that everyone was ooc in the summary or something because no offence but you completely destroyed Vegeta's character. I'm sorry but I really wish I never started reading this.

you just completely ruined vegeta and his character, and we both know,i know that vegeta wouldn't call bull ALL of those things, sure stupid, imbecile, but whore and bitch? this is getting out of the line, smoking? vegeta would never smoke, cut himself? sorry you just blew it

You are such a talented writer. Keep up the good work. Btw your story had me in tears!

For the English scene, I think it has less to do with Vegeta being smart and more because the school is stupid.

I liked how they started hating each other and then love happened.

awwww! That was nice & short

I'm reading the reviews, and some of you appear to say that the story is pretty dark sometimes. You know, Vegeta's back story and all. Read "Homeless Boy" or "Rediscovering Honour". His back story just makes you want to cry for him every day. It's beyond dark.

Normally, I would complain that the characters are all in school, but this is to entertaining! But I think ain't would be a lot more in character for Vegeta to just walk out of class.

Love this story ! I will be on my fave list
P.S. 18 should have a job as a fortune teller!

I just wanted to review and let you know that I liked your story and am greatly looking forward to the sequel

Yey! Finally finished after 2 nights of non-stop reading!
I actually thought this story would be a tragedy with the title "till Death do we part" and the whole "He's Dead" thing in chapter 27, but all i can say is that it was a very very good read!

Btw the you have a way of picking just the right song that compliments scenes in the story perfectly. It's totally devastating my emotions hahaha!

Thank you for the very good read!