okay but abrupt end really with no finish or resiprication

okay not best place to end it really

good story

good story but bleagh for the abrupt end

Hiya, just dropping you a comment to say that there's someone out there who's read this and thought it was good. Ended a bit abruptly though, but yeah it was good. I enjoyed your writing style and would like to read something of yours with a plot and see what else you can create. I've kinda lost where I was going with this (you might not even read it) BUT basicaly good work, keep it up x

Nice love it

Is Jade teasing Tori or is she teasing us? So now cool to leave us hanging, LOL.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Loved the writing hope for more jori...

Very nice. Are you planning on writing more Jori?

And you leave us hanging half way through. Oh well, at least you got them together. Good stuff.