Please update soon !

Love it!

OMG cant wait for more.. keep up the great wrok

I'm very impressed...I could picture each character exactly. You absolutely nailed their mannerism, voice, etc. Well done!

Disclaimer - I tend to review as I read, often answering my own questions, spell checking, adding pointless information or fun facts, songs that the chapter reminds me of. I talk more to the characters then the writer. If you can understand my reviews, then I applaud you ... anyway enjoy.

I understand everything Felicity is feeling and I feel the same about Malcolm, but Oliver needs to defeat Ra’s if he wants life at all - and Thea.

Malcolm has his own house … train there.

Poor Roy … caught in the middle of mum and dad’s tiff.

I would love several more chapters

Now I'm going to be sad when I watch the show and she doesn't give him that speech. Really good.

That was a great. Love the tone you've set up and I love really looking forward to the next chapter :)

Great start to your story
Looking forward to sexy times!
I know people were annoyed with felicity in the last epis

Great start...love it when there is some drama and anger.

Loved it.. Go Felicity and I totally agree.. Hopefully we will see more of this story; it has great potential.