I am only getting started in this genre so this is only one of the first fanfic on GoT I've read but this seemed very genuinely them. I really liked how you added up emotions to the scene. Looking forward to read more from you!

I totally understand not trying to write anything for these two. They really are complicated! But I'm so glad that you did. I just wish there were more JorahDaenerys fics out there, as I just love the both of them so much. This was very nicely written. I hope you decide to write more!

This was so beautifully written and loved seeing it from Jorah's POV. I really hope you continue writing them and give their relationship your own spin. After all, the comolicated ones are those that give good fodder for interesting stories. :)