| Reviews for Alpha |
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   MoralityDuality24 chapter 23 . 4/6 Man this is old and it is really wearing me down. The lack of actual porn is the worst. The lacking development and massive massive pileup up of harem is a close second and Clark and the super humans constantly jobbing is the last straw. Deafhstroke should be dead. |
| Valaista chapter 2 . 1/21 Looks like I'm gonna have to read this in Archiveofourown to get the full experience ;-) Ciao! |
| Valaista chapter 1 . 1/21 Wow soo cute... Plus it's a lovely concept. I'm hooked :-) |
| Narnia-Bound1 chapter 8 . 7/7/2017 I love this story but there are so many grammar and punctuation errors it gets a little hard to fellow at times. I would suggest a beta to help edit and rewrite it to remove any errors. |
| LoamyCoffee chapter 1 . 5/15/2017 Hmm, feels like a mix of Smallville and Superman the animated series. cool~ |
| Meaningless Us3rname chapter 12 . 8/24/2016 I confused Volcana with Claire from iZombie. Whoops |
| Guest chapter 30 . 12/7/2015 Love it please continue |
| blaker316 chapter 30 . 8/31/2015 awesome ending hope for Sequel |
| blaker316 chapter 29 . 8/25/2015 awesome |
| blaker316 chapter 28 . 8/18/2015 awesome |
| blaker316 chapter 27 . 8/11/2015 awesome |
| blaker316 chapter 26 . 8/4/2015 awesome |
| blaker316 chapter 25 . 7/31/2015 awesome |
| DialACow chapter 24 . 7/28/2015 Entertaining chapter, but you made a slight mistake in Helena's line after Lynns was caught. You have her saying Lynns has 'seventy degree burns across most of his body'. There are only three 'degrees' of burns. I would suggest changing the line to 'third degree burns over seventy percent of his body'. Otherwise kudos. |
| blaker316 chapter 24 . 7/28/2015 awesome |
