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Chapter was totally worth the wait. Really looking forward to the next one.

You write all the relationships so beautifully. I really like the dynamics between Fenris and Hawke and Fenris and Anders. And pretty much everyone else too, but those relationships are my favorite.

Love this. Long and full of anguish and hope. Just sl beautiful.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

And again a lovely chapter; so wonderful how you manage to bend the events into your own story! Don't worry too much about the gloom, I'm certain things will going to look up.

And don't worry too much about Sebastian either. To be honest, I detest the unctuous hypocrite. He preaches about forgiveness and at the same time cannot wait to take revenge on anyone who wronged him. And the way he tries to win Fenris over makes me sick.

Oh, and I totally agree with you about the timeline, it's absolutely silly and doesn't make any sense at all. My advise: just do what you please, it will always be better!

Now this is a surprise! I was thinking in the first chapters she should have been a mage it makes more impact! Lol
Oh Fenris what an ass XD

Wonderful story, I read it with so much pleasure. So don't you think there's no-one out there who enjoys this (I know how it feels, believe me). Many surprising turns and I admire the beautiful way you describe Fenris's feelings and fears. And this one ends with a cliffhanger ... I hope you'll be back soon!

You know I was hoping to just read Fenris& Hawke :( well shit I guess this is not what I expected. ...
I do feel disappointed... I don't mind reading flirting between different characters or jealousy but this well...
Don't get me wrong you write incredible

Wow so she did sleep with Isabela damn
Oh and by the way Hot even if they don't really touch very nice!

My heart! XD So damn beautiful! It's a shame that he can't stand the eny touch.
I will like fenris to talk more but yeah he is just not a talking person

WOW! I already like your story I'm felling so fluffy inside lol
I always ask myself why someone like Anders when you have that fenris his voice, his looks, his hair XD
The dialog is funny points on Varick by the way and obviously for fenris and Hawke

I am loving your interpretation of the story and characters! I am finding Hawke and Fenris to be especially relatable. The liberty you take with the story and characters is refreshing and I am impatient to find out what happens next. Keep up the good work!

Chapter 8 is my favorite so far. So much tension and so surprised he didn't blow up at her but I liked it better that he didn't and just remained dumbfounded.

Nice one. Very empowering.