Damn, girl. You got it. I love all the story. The way you conduct it is amazing. It's sweet, light and believable. If I were Bella, I would feel the same way in that situation, so I really understand her. Great fic

Hot. Loved it!

Loved watchin' Bella's reticence give way to the inevitable but who the hell could blame her!?

Still my favorite! Please continue!

I loved it..

Great story. Loved the building tension. Thanks.

I hate that I am just getting to this story. RL has not allowed for much reading! IT WAS FANTASTIC!

Loved it!

That was hot and I really hope this story continues, there's so much potential. Love it

If I didn't know it was written by you...I wouldn't have suspected it, I don't think. There are subtle differences in how this was written. I liked it though, very much. I really liked the slow build to their getting together. I really like this Edward. I don't agree with Bella that they are in very different places in their lives, since they are both University students dedicated and working hard towards their academic dreams...sounds pretty similar to me. I think Bella kept telling herself that so that she would have the strength to stay away. I don't buy her rationalizations though and I am glad she let them slip away and gave into what she really wanted. I like that he told her he wanted more than just one night too; I like that he made his intentions and desires known. Sounds pretty mature to me.

How wonderful!

I never reviewed this story (my computer crashed when I read it) and I just want to say that it was one of my favorites for this contest. I truly did love it, all of it. I'm just sad it didn't win a place in the contest, because it should have. I would have voted more times if I could.

Is this going to be continued? Weird place to leave things at. Please continue!

Thank you for entering our Contest! You def earned my vote ;)

I prefer an older Edward. But that was hot!