Reviews for Second Chance |
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multyfangirl21 chapter 5 . 10/26/2018 I figured that he was still in town at least. |
Neox.is chapter 19 . 4/11/2018 beautiful! |
snoopykid chapter 19 . 1/31/2018 Awesome job! Thank you for updating. I know as an author on here myself I know the feeling of having stories that I haven’t updated in years...(more than 3) but I am glad you managed to do it. |
princessbinas chapter 19 . 1/31/2018 No problem. The ending is bitter sweet, which fits nicely and it has enough stuuf to be given a sequel when you chose to make it. Overall, great job. |
Invader Johnny chapter 19 . 1/30/2018 After everything, the important thing here is that they never lost the meaning of what it means to be a family and the Fentons will stick together though the good times and the bad times. The ending implied as much, nicely done. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
Invader Johnny chapter 18 . 1/30/2018 Oh you monster you! I hope Danielle gets stable soon enough and I'm sure the Fentons will try anything to stabilize her. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
princessbinas chapter 17 . 1/29/2018 You have a small error right here: Who the hell was shouting? Without any prompting, Danny stepped over to the door and stuck her head through. It is supposed to be Dani. Other than that, I cannot see anything wrong. And I think Walker has some issues. He hoards ghosts in his prison like someone hoards junk or pets in their house. He really needs a psychologist, and Spectra does not count. |
Feurrige chapter 17 . 1/29/2018 wow amazing and I can't wait to read the last two chapters. I really hope Jack and Maddie learned their lesson. And somehow I feel a bit sorry for Walker but if he is holding so much on his grudge and the rules. I also wonder if he ever returns to Fenton Works. |
Invader Johnny chapter 17 . 1/28/2018 Its really sad that Danny's fear was so strong that he had to run away. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
Invader Johnny chapter 16 . 1/27/2018 Oh boy, Jazz is in some serious trouble, and at Walker's hands no less. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
Feurrige chapter 16 . 1/27/2018 Oh man I really hope, Dani isn't melting and everything ends well. Why are Maddie and Jack so stubborn? Can't they see that Danny is happy? But I think they always, careing mor for themself then what their children want espacilly Danny. I really hope they rethink their idea of removing Dannys ghost half. But I also wonder, what Walker would do to Jack and Maddie? Why hasn't he ordered his guards to overshadow them and locked them up? It would serve Jack and Maddie right. |
princessbinas chapter 15 . 1/26/2018 It's a trap, guys! A trap! |
Invader Johnny chapter 15 . 1/25/2018 And now Sam and Tucker are dacing death in the face, oh boy. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
123booilove chapter 14 . 12/25/2016 love the story! Plz make more soon |
Guest chapter 10 . 1/12/2016 Jazz was perfect for that situation. Couldn't have said it any better myself! Sam also could have exploded like that, but it was worth it to see Jazz have a spaz! |