Reviews for After The Tone
cabralfan27 chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
Very nice, I really like the way he thinks his thoughts (If that makes sensealthough a can't tell if it's Jacket's POV or someone else's.

Anyways, I was wondering if you could do a similar fic about Tony from Hotline Miami 2 in his final moments. C'mon, the final thoughts of a psychopathic killer, holed up in a room against police with no way out, surrounded by two of the closest things he had ever had to friends, one dead, one dying, and no word from the other two, left to assume the worst? You can't tell me that's not a good idea for a story! Well, you could, but you'd be wrong, at least in my eyes.
IntelligentFish chapter 1 . 2/20/2015
There's potential here, but I found the delivery of the story confusing. The introduction could benefit with physical description of the setting to put an image in the readers head before going ahead with the scenario. As it stands, I found it confusing. Are the messages taking place while the wolf man bangs on the door, desperately trying to get in? Or is the narrator reliving past experiences every time he listens to a message?