| Reviews for Body Language |
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   Burning4Peeta chapter 10 . 5/21/2018 When you re-posted the story I think you forgot the last few chapters... I still love this story but I need to read the part where she returns again... |
| smartmeh007 chapter 10 . 5/6/2018 Whaaaaaa cliffhanger Please Please Please update sooonnnn |
| Suyi chapter 10 . 4/15/2017 What happened to the last chapter? |
| nandy7781 chapter 10 . 4/1/2017 Hey. The last few chapters are gone! Can you please repost them? Please? |
| charlz2606 chapter 10 . 3/29/2017 What happened to the rest of the story? |
| mackie80 chapter 10 . 3/7/2017 OH, no! Please don't end the story here! She deserves a happy ending. |
| insidejokepartyof1 chapter 12 . 3/16/2016 I really enjoyed this story, it was quite different than i was expecting. I was hella confused by the Gale/Peeta situation. But what I want to know is what was the name of the girl that became Katniss? I don't recall you ever mentioning her name. Also I am assuming that her aunt was effie trinkets character? Wow the revelation of what the original Katniss was like and what had happened was shocking. |
| Willowstar23 chapter 12 . 8/27/2015 Awww, great story! |
| Willowstar23 chapter 10 . 8/27/2015 Very very sad. |
| may96 chapter 12 . 7/27/2015 I love this story. Sad that it's over, but I'll read it again I'm sure. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/14/2015 I don't think I can deal with the... The exposed breasts thing. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2015 Very few typos so far, and I must say I'm greatly enjoying it. I will say, though, for future reference (and this is something I myself had trouble with for a very long time), in possessive form, "its" does not have an apostrophe. "It's" is the contraction for "it is". And "its" is possessive. Instead of just telling you (and anyone else who reads this and makes use of the information) to suck it up and memorize it, which I found failed miserably in my case, I shall explain why. So "its" is possessive in the same way that "hers" and "theirs" is- without an apostrophe. So I just compare it to those in my head, and I know which one is which. But other than that, that's it. Which, mind you, is insanely impressive, and far better than I could have hoped when your A/N said you lacked a beta. So yeah, very, very impressive. Good job. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/13/2015 It is well-written but I have to agree, that it is a bit rushed.0 the gap betweEn transitions in the later chapters are quite huge. You did a wonderful job on this and quite frankly I love your work. You could do some improvement in slowing down and easing into the chapterS though. |
| charlz2606 chapter 12 . 7/13/2015 Fantastic story! One of the best I've read in a long time. Any chance of an epilogue part 2... Say 5 years down the road? |
| pumpkinking5 chapter 12 . 7/13/2015 Thanks! Their daughter is born! I think the name was fitting Delly. Katniss remembered Peeta's sister. It was truly a lovely tribute to his sister. Katniss was right. They will teach her about the world above from the both of them, but mostly from Katniss. Squiggles was so cute trying to bridge a friendship with Katniss. Yet, both of them know that it is Peeta that they are willing to make happy. Katniss is finally happy! She found her family and extended one as well. Great job! |
