Reviews for The Widow and the Wizard |
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Guest chapter 13 . 2/14 This was such a good story, it's a shame you have given up on it. I'd have liked a bit more info from the HP stories running in parallel to the Avengers story, and perhaps a bit more interaction between harry & natasha to round out their relationship but I liked how you covered a lot of time with brief explanations. I think your kick-ass harry is a great invention and just what is needed in the HPverse. I'm just amazed how fantastically well you write in a language that is not your first language. It puts all us tongue tied Brits to shame. |
Guest chapter 7 . 2/13 I realise it would spoil your story if you took this line, but isn't it very odd that they are training a CHILD to go on ops for them? Shouldn't they ship him off to school and give him counselling for being exposed to crime and killing at a young age? Amoral or what? |
Bogdon chapter 5 . 11/12/2019 Вау! Вы очень серьёзно и внимательно подошли к написанию этой истории. Я привыкла к Гарри Поттеру, поэтому не понимала, насколько недопустимыми были действия Хагрида. Я имею в виду, вы, написали всю сцену очень психологично и реалистично, сохраняя характер героев, но все же я не чувствую, что у Гарри был иной выбор(например, Хогвартс). Это интересно. Хочу сказать, что повод, который вы предоставили для знакомства ваших главных героев очень внятный и лёгкий. Даже дальнейшее воспитание написано с заботой. Спасибо) |
Oddballzebra chapter 11 . 6/5/2019 it's demigod not semigod |
Oddballzebra chapter 10 . 6/5/2019 Why does everyone feel the need to make Harry short? |
Oddballzebra chapter 4 . 6/5/2019 Umm what? You do realize that Green Arrow is part of a totally different universe right? |
Oddballzebra chapter 3 . 6/5/2019 Where are they in the Marvel timeline? Is Natasha part of SHIELD yet? If so then why the hell are they employing a little kid to do assassinations for them? |
Oddballzebra chapter 2 . 6/5/2019 You REALLY need a beta |
FlowerChild23 chapter 8 . 12/26/2018 I'm sorry but this is actually funny stuff. I love the mom/son relationship thing. |
anon chapter 11 . 12/8/2018 okay idk if this was an intentional reference but the whole thing with natasha saying how things can’t be simply fixed with a snap of a finger kinda had me dying a little inside bc of infinity war but also this is a fantastic story so far and i love it |
HellsMaji chapter 10 . 10/28/2018 So eleven year old Harry knows he's a badass, and doesn't give a toss if someone calls him kid or midget. But fourteen year old Harry gets defensive and petulant? Just makes him seem even more a child. Liked the younger version better. |
MargaritaS chapter 13 . 10/22/2018 This was fantastic and I wish your muse had stuck around to allow you to finish but I am SO SO glad you left us this last chapter :) I hope you get inspired to return to this fandom again soon because your writing is captivating :) |
stylo1 chapter 1 . 6/12/2018 not bad, though a bit vage on harrys skill set, to bad you stopprd when the story got good but at least you gave us a summary. but what a falcon has to do with deheading voldemort ill never know, nor understand why wizards would follow hydra |
RedB04 chapter 13 . 5/5/2018 Niceee |
Sandaime Hokage chapter 12 . 1/18/2018 Really enjoyed the read |