Rather childish wiring talent (I mean the level of it not your age so please don't be offended). It can scare even the hardest writers off. Errors and mistakes.

I really like where you are going with this story. ibagree about Peter, Miles Teller is such a good actor and I have a hard time hating him completely. I can't wait to see how you write Eric! keep writing you have a great talent!

I was a little nervous to read this one.
But I really have to say I like it. I like the fact that Peter is a little nicer in this one.
Definetly keep going with this. I really want to see how this progresses.

I've come to love Eric x oc fanfics and I want to read yours now because your character developing is really good.

Keep going