great

BRILLIANT!

You know something that really annoys me? That everyone just keep going on and on about how Jess will be hurting Rory, how hes going to corrupt her...and all that crap. The funny thing is...and Jess? Cant he also get hurt? Because last time I checked he had feelings for her...so, yes, he can get even more than Rory since he never open up to anybody...

Nice job with the Jess/Christopher conv.
I liked most of the story, but I was a little iffy on the first ferw chapters. I really liked it all the same.

hey! im really enjoying this fic so far. I haven't read all of it yet, but I plan on it! I just wanted to point out one thing from chapter 3.

LORELAI: Sure there was that chalk incident, then he 'accidentally' threw a basketball at some kid's head, and he conveniently forgot that that other kid was allergic to peanuts and gave him a peanut filled something or rather.

LUKE: Yeah, not much trouble.

LORELAI: No chalk out lines, though. No theft.

Lorelai is kind of contradicting herself there. First, she is talking about the things Jess has done and mentions the chalk thing. Then she says there were NO chalk outlines. Maybe I'm missing something, but I think that's a mistake.

) Hope I helped. Great story.

Love this story! You really have a nack for writing in the style that the characters speak in. Great Job! Please Write More! :)

I really liked this story, it was great. My favorite couple was Luke and Lorelai, but Jess and Rory, Lane and Dave were written well also. I hope you write more, this story could go somewhere!

MORE! DEFINATELY MORE!

Great story! I love that Luke and Lorelai are together now. Rory and Jess are so cute together. Keep up the great work!

Wow! This story is awesome! Update soon!

That was cute. Beauty and the Beast is such a good movie. Now on to read more chapters.

It's great to have you back at updating this story again! It was a really good chapter, and I liked the Lane/Dave/Mrs. Kim drama, but I'd like to see more Rory/Jess interaction ... then again, I'm a Lit fan, so it's just expected : ) Update again soon!

I'm glad you updated because I really enjoy this story. I loved the Dave and Lane part because I just think it's so cute. Also liked the Christopher/Rory part... It was sad but I think you wrote it beatifully. Lastly, I wasnted to say that I loved Let's Dance too.

Good chapter. I love the conversation b/w Jess and Chris. It's like after Rory left, they were just two guys talking about cars and stuff. Veery weird. I also liked the Java Junky interaction here. Very cute. Especially in the beginning when Taylor comes in. Gotta love that. Everything was good. Please write another chapter as soon as you can. Thanks. O:)

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