I think a chapter should be 3000 words

Thank you for giving me the summary. I will still read the full story when I have time I just like to be up to date. I cant wait to start reading kidnapped! thx again. God Bless;)

This story was beautiful it was well written the story was great and everything went together perfectly great job (::) (::)

I am already routing for Lydia she has been through a lot and the way her sister talked it made her sound weak and worthless I also thin that either lloyd or Cole should like her and she like them ( I prefer lloyd he can kinda relat to her problem plays between u as he is the hottest out of all the ninjas Cole is a distant second)

I can't believe Blair died it can't be
You defiantly need to make a sequel

Please please llease make a sequel thanks

I love this legend. Very intriguing

Jay of course. I love his humor

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEES

Great ending but come to think of it, the story doesn't need a second. It's already great and it'll be hard for the writer to think of a new problem. But great story! And keep writing!

-ZaneLoverFan88

You should definitely do a sequel. :)

Lloyd!

Oh wow this was the best chapter by far!

I love this chapter and the ninjas new rides!

I really like this, but why would sensei let the ninja of darkness on the team.