Please update this story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next

This is such a great story , I was reading the reviews and some are quite mean

Honestly, the premise is nice but the delivery is lacking. The text is all bunched together and the paragraphs overly large. It makes it difficult to read and deters readers.

Perhaps too much explanation and not enough of the actual actions. Show instead of saying what is happening.

Promising start, I'd suggest multiple Betas for variety and a rewrite.

TAKE THE DO I’S OUT. there’s no need for them. They make this story a headache to read despite the wicked plot! GET A BETA

Get this rewritten. Love the story but it’s a pain to read. Too many I do this I do that they do this they do that. Instead of writing what they’re doing. Have you ever read a book?

I love the story but you could really do with editing it. People don’t say we do this we do that even in books, they just do it. Four example “ As I feel terrible for my brother, did I already see something“. Should be as I feel terrible for my brother, I already saw something”. you really need a beta to edit this story so it’s actually readable

One small error in this fascinating story. You have Poseidon calling Zeus father.

Also since harry is Sirius's son in this story, does that make harry Draco's n Tonks's Cousin on their mother's side, as well Bellatrix's nephew so 2 speak? Answer my question through Gmail since I don't go 2 fanfiction. net very often anymore, please.

You 4got about Charle Weasley.

Has anyone ever told you that you were a good writer? Because you're not. This is the second story of yours that I've checked out and your writing is a total mess. Bad grammar, bad sentence structure, run-on sentences, just a mess. Sorry but I just call it like I read it.

Wicked story but you use Does ‘simething’ and do ‘something’ in the wrong context way too much

How does Harry look like without glamour?

This is really good! Are you still planning to do the sequel?

I would like to point this out... You made Poseidon Athena's brother in this chapter but it is NOT true Harry is Athena's brother NOT nephew and Poseidon is Harry's and Athena's uncle.

Regardless if the story, some of those rules are the Most Random things I've seen in prompt guidelines. Like seriously, who actually cares if Oliver, Katie, etc have different family/home situations enough to specify it as a rule?