Please update

I am glad I was able to help. this story is getting good keep up the good work!

Will Marco and Sayer find out who Atem is in the next couple chapters or in the next chapter to turn Atem against the good guys?

Oh no the girl need to keep their love ones safe.

To get to Tea is capturing the person that means a everything to her and that is Atem. If you take away the most important thing of your target then they would sacrifice themselves to order to save the most important thing to them and I think you would do something with that fact that Atem is important to Tea that would make him a perfect weakness for Marco to exposed.

Tea would do anything to protect Atem from any harm even giving up herself to Marco. If Marco knew who Atem really is then he would turn Atem against Tea as Marco's mindless servant. Atem can break down mentally if someone gets into his mind and it did happen in the fourth Season of Duel Monster when Dartz took away Yugi plus cause Atem to become unstable mess.

as a. suggestion have sayer know about Tea and have him join Marco and have sayer make a deal with him that if he gave Marco Tea then he would have help getting Akiza. as for Carly I think you should have her FOLLOW Sayer to that time and she helps Akiza, Tea and Jack. Again this is what I think should happen this story is yours after all. don't mean to overstep boundaries.

plz continue

Oh god, as the original
Like, continuous * heart *

Our Atem is better than this more responsible plus did you forget he's like mana and mahad a magician he could have healed her and no crying from a pharaoh

DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN! lol

Yusei! XD
I wanna see where this is going

Great story so far!

lol Yugi 3

Awwwww... :D