What is up with that story about the girl, guest i don’t that was real like seriously how old r u 10 I’m talking about Clarissa

So it’s really good like awesome like I said I’m re reading it but I’m sure that anyone would agree with me . Sorry to break it to ya but it was just fight fight fight fight seriously one bad guy after another anyway other than that it’s really great

I think you got your stories mixed up you are calling the ten tails forbidden, but that was different story.

enthusiastic gaara. what a wonderful oxymoron

lol, minato has to pick what hes afraid of

It took me two days to read the prequel and he sequel to this story! It was great!

great story and glad to see its finally finished though i was a little lost on how the Forbidden worked in place of the ten tails but that's the only problem i found *thumbs up*

Awesome story.

Hey can u continue the story through boruto's genin and chuunin time with naruto hokage

nice job

Epilogues are almost always sad, because you know you're leaving the great story behind...

Well, THAT is how you make an EPIC battle vs the FINALLY FINAL VILLAIN.
NOT the shit way that Trollmoto did.

Also, no, I didn't feel like watching (well, reading) a DBZ story, loool.

Oh, wow, THREE chapters and COMPLETE!
Gonna read NOW!

Yay! A baby is coming!

Husband and wife battling side by side. This is truly a great series you've made. I cannot wait to see where you'll take it next.