I loved this! I would love to see it become more.

Romantic n hot in d end. Awesome story!

Is that it? Please tell me that is not it it sounds so good I love it XD

zam HOT like no jock love me some zolu!

This is so sweet and passionate at the same time. I really like this story, just wish it was a bit longer. Maybe if you make another one you can make it a little longer? Just a thought. Other than that, I liked it a lot, so much that I didn't see any mistakes. It was very well written. Great job and thank you for posting it for everyone to read. Hope you make another one of these two.

I like almost all of it. The goal thing doesn't make sense, but then again this is fan fiction! so anything goes! love it 3

O my,

I loved it tell the end it made me so sad

OMG! This the best ZoLu plot I've read. It's just what we all want to happen in the anime. Zoro obviously loves his captain and needs to show it to him. Through hot yummy sex!

( 。・_・。)人(。・_・。 )

( F ) ( i ) ( r ) ( e ) ( b ) ( a ) ( l ) ( l ) - ( F ) ( u ) ( c ) ( h ) ( s ) ( i ) ( a )

Oh my golly g! This was too cute. And 100% agree there is not enough ZoLu and it makes me cry! They are one of my favorite pairings!

I really enjoyed this a lot.

Amazing! I love it a lot!

Love this story

Ah, Zoro is so cute in this love for capitan. I love this one shot. And don't worry, your lemon was very good.

Sorry for my english.

hoooo... zoro truly keep his time and opportunity didn't he?
ahhh I just like it :*