Reviews for Comfort |
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![]() ![]() Can you please make a fanfiction called "Rebels Quest For Camelot"? |
![]() ![]() Awww️ Love it |
![]() ![]() I just love this with every part of my heart. I wanna a Kanan here right now, agh. I love this *-* "When a hero cries it's not because they are weak, it's because they have been strong for too long" I don't know why, but this line make me feel to Harry (you know, Hary Potter, duh?). Goodbyeee |
![]() ![]() I think you should have made Kanan cry when Hera died. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aaaw! Poor Ezra! Kanan is a very good comforter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YASS DEE FLUFFYNESS! DE CUTES! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww! I loved this so much! |
![]() ![]() GREAT STORY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK, why do I always tear up when I read these things? I know it's my brother and all but I'm a freaking sith for forces sake! shoot. How would the inquisitor have reacted to this. |
![]() ![]() Awwwwwww that's so cute |
![]() ![]() You took a quote from johny depp and modifieed it that's awesome and I love the father son between kanan and ezra |
![]() ![]() That was a great story , thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing! I love how Kanan is sooo caring in this oneshot. Keep up the incredible work! I can't wait to read more of your incredible stories! Don't push yourself too hard. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story but because I can't help but leave concrit - pronouns were create for a reason. You start a ton a paragraphs with "Ezra", which makes sense because he's the main character. However, you can start paragraphs with "he" or with action words like "deciding to" instead of "Ezra decided to" to vary up the starting phrases a bit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this as so sweet! I love that Ezra finally got a hug! It kinda made me cry, though. Too many feels from a cartoon! |