Reviews for Last Ones Standing
sacsh chapter 38 . 9/22/2016
Oh my god! What happens next?! This is torture and I just have to know! You can't leave us hanging like this. Unfairrr! Please just put us out of our misery and update soon! This story is amazing (obviously) and you have to continue! Please update soon!
makeitreignnn chapter 38 . 7/7/2016
oh jesus please update this like i live for this fic. it's beautiful
Circinae chapter 38 . 5/27/2016
I well and truly hope the authority wins this match, man. Seth is so in need of a big win lol. This story is incredible, regardless.
GottaLoveReiding chapter 38 . 2/13/2016
Shit... Came back to continue this story and holy shit, it's got me as hooked as it did when I was reading it before! I'd love to see Paige and Seth wrestle, if that's an option haha can't wait for more!
Lies of a Silver Tongue chapter 38 . 2/5/2016
Pleaseeeeeeeeee update! I live this so much so far. I'm praying that Paige doesn't have a weak moment and cause them the match, or take Seth back in the end or something. Anyways, UPDATE!
s chapter 38 . 1/11/2016
Amazing, heartbreaking fic. This chapter kept my attention the whole way through. So excited for the next update.
Brico4889 chapter 38 . 1/13/2016
I really hope that Seth save Paige
pssc chapter 38 . 1/12/2016
Ughhhh. Can't wait next chapter
Sarcastic Nightmare chapter 38 . 1/12/2016
Oh god. I knew they wouldn't play fair but why do they need two monsters on their side? Can't Kane go back to hating Seth for his rude remarks that probably haven't been made in this story but watching his reactions on tv were kinda funny. Anyways, I love the start, I like your ability to type the action in a way that can be visualized. Awesome chapter and I can't wait for part 2!
Bajor10 chapter 38 . 1/12/2016
Really hope Seth saves paige during the match update really soon please
mauveshadows chapter 38 . 1/10/2016
Shit's already going down and more shit is about to go down now that the Big Show, J&J security, and Kane made their presence known. I really like how you took a moment and wrote about the first time Seth met Paige. It has that dramatic effect, like "really? how did we get from here to here? what the fuck happened to the two of us?"

Mad props for this chapter. It was really descriptive & I loved how you described each encounter each team member has with their opponents (especially Paige & Seth, like I said earlier, how they just stare at each other and they're taken back to the first time they met).

Really anxious to see the end of this story. I still get a feeling that Seth doesn't really want to see Paige's demise. I'll be waiting ever so patiently for the next chapter. :D
Brico4889 chapter 37 . 12/15/2015
I am excited to see how the story ends
pssc chapter 37 . 12/13/2015
Update, pleaseeeeee, Can't wait more FEED ME MORE
mauveshadows chapter 37 . 12/13/2015
Oh God, those damn cliffhangers. I get chills!

I'm kind of glad you didn't include Daniel Bryan in Brie's POV. I know it's not necessary to include him here since he's only been mentioned, not really a big character in the story but I feel like if he made an appearance, I don't know, I'd find it really weird if I read a scene between those two. I mean, maybe not, he is her husband, but I feel like if he made an appearance Brie would be so out of character to me. Strange isn't it? You're supposed to be yourself when you're with your husband, be nice & sweet, and loving, but I feel like this shouldn't be the case with Brie. Not in this story.

Interesting to see that Seth is dead set on seeing Paige's demise, hmm.. let's see if you're still thinking that during the match.

I love, love how you wrote Paige at the end. I can almost picture her behind the curtain at Wrestlemania tagging with AJ like this just seconds before she makes her entrance. Ooh, man, this is exciting. I really loved the back to back chapters, it really sets the mood before the big match, everyone reevaluating all that's happened, and getting their head in the game for the big match. Ahh, I can't wait for the last three chapters. May the best team win!
mauveshadows chapter 36 . 12/13/2015
Long time no see. :) I really like what you did here writing each character's perspective & thoughts on all that's happened and splitting them up into two different chapters. I especially like how completely in-character you kept them while you wrote it. Oh, it was just amazing. You're going to kill it writing your own story :D

Onto the next chapter now, you'll probably get a full view of my thoughts on maybe everything that's happened in LOS into one review, or I don't know, I might save it for the last chapter. Yeah, I'll do that. :D You'll get my full thoughts on both of these chapters back to back in the next review for sure, so yeah, I'll be right back. :D
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