Interesting concept

Pikachu really has no sense of self-preservation, does he?

this probably won't be updated again, but i just wanted to say: thank you for the 'legendary-turning-human' story fanfiction dot net deserves. as someone who's seen many a story of this trope pass through- for almost a decade now- thanks for giving us such a well-written one! (even if you won't update this again, i wish you good luck in your future writings)

I love this story and I can't wait for more

O my gosh thank you! I've been waiting for this story to update its so original and great! I hope you update again!

As good as the day I read the first chapter. So disappointing that this work only has 30 reviews. Your command of the English language alone deserves more recognition.

How old is this chapter? It seems like a lot of it wasn't thought out as much as it could've been. The battle at the end was completely ridiculous. There's no way for that bug catcher to be that strong, especially in Viridian forest of all places, let alone anywhere else.

Pursuit is learned at level 22. Even if you aren't doing levels per se, Viridian forest is too early to learn something that advanced. The same goes with X-scissor, which is also a move far too advanced for the location they're at. The biggest problem, however, was how he had the Beedrill ground itself. That's an expert level strategy that even the champions don't use.

And then there's Metapod. Why limit them like that? It seems like the only thing Metapod was worried about if he evolved was his obligation to the other members of his species, which he wouldn't need to do since he's traveling, and his urge to breed constantly. So why not let Metapod evolve and then remove the breeding urge? I feel like that would've been a less-rule-breaking fix.

Even so, I find it fascinating, and wonderfully written.

The idea of Arceus, the pokemon god, traveling arround the world he created, to make it better and what not appeals me a whole lot.

This... is... PERFECT! How have I never even thought about this before?! It makes so much sense!

Wow...WOW This is awesome! I really like the idea of Arceus disguising itself as Ash (good thing he didn't manage to finish saying Ash'tray' by the way) He seems so peaceful and clueless at the same time, and Pikachu is over the moon being Arceus' pokemon, which is also really cute and funny. Really enjoyed reading it, to the very last letter!

This is a very good story; I hope you'll continue on with it...

You should make a second chapter

Wow.

Your "third-language-tier English skills?" Ha, more like a veteran fanfic writer! Seriously, man, I clicked on this story a few months ago but for some reason, I couldn't find it again. Anyway, great story. I couldn't even find any errors (mostly because I was enthralled by the plot) in this when I easily nitpicked a few in more "popular" fanfics. Keep up the awesome work!

Okay I vote for more!