Hiii, i like your story, it can go somewhere, I would like to take it, make some changes, and well just work with it.

I HOPE YOU WILL PLEASE LET US KNOW WHEN THIS WONDERFUL STORY GETS ADOPTED.

more please this is interesting.

I DO LIKE THIS PLEASE KEEP GOING. IT IS VERY INTERESTING AND HAS LOTS OF PLACES TO GO.

i like this story i hope you update with another chapter soon so i know what happens

wow
this is really realistic.
hope you keep updating

Great so far. I hope to read more soon :D

Good start and I hope to read more soon.
Go Steve you kickass!
Gen

Love it!
Can't wait to read more!

So Melanie is 17 now? I really like this story so far, it's sad but realistic in a way. Also I love the avengers and am excited to see what type of relationships form between them and this girl.
Hope to read more soon!

Update! I'm in love with this story

love it!

I didn't catch many grammar mistakes in this chapter. I did notice that you switched to first person POV in the beginning. It was one time, not a big deal I just noticed it. I love your story, albeit the horrible truths of child abuse and rape (you write that heavy and sensitive topic well) but one suggestion. Try to make your sentences flow a little more. Maybe some more discriptive, or out a comma in instead of a short sentence. I have to work on that all the time, I make my sentences sound like facts. Great story though! And you really know your medical information!

Wow is all I can say

Update I love