I've only read a few chapters her but I think it's amazing. finally a good story about mellie and fitz. you're very talented in writing them both in character. I love it.

Meant Jackson. Not Kackson.

Sequel please!

I'm so sad this story Is over. I really enjoyed it! Plus, they never found out about Kackson!? Please don't stop. Pretty please. :)

Great story! Do sad its finished :( :(

Is there going to be a sequel?!
At least a one shot of them finding out about jacksons betrayal

Ughhhhh Jackson is such an asshole! Totally didn't see that coming!

Wow Jackson. Just wow. Great chapter!

Wow
jackson is a dickhead
is he working with Jerry?it seems unlikely but could be possible

Great update, as always.

Fitz's dream was epic lol. So glad that Fitz finally confronted Jerry, can't wait to see what happens next.

Wow. Great chapter! I hate Jerry even more now. What a douche. Still can't get over how much I love mellitz in this story.

This is my favorite chapter so far! I'm glad Fitz isn't pretending things are OK with Jerry anymore.

Great update. I hope to see more dialogue between mellitz soon though. And talks with mellie and her therapist. This story has them interacting different than any other story I've read. Love that. They are so nice to each other. It's a wonderful change.

I love this story! It is soooooo good! It's really detailed and descriptive and I just enjoy reading it. I hope you deal with Big Jerry soon!

Fitz and Mellie's relationship is really interesting, I love the way you write them. Great chapter.

I hope you include the dialogue between Mellie and the therapist in the next chapter, that would be quite interesting.

P.S I always get really excited when I get a notification that you updated. Keep up the great writing :)

Fitz is such a sweet husband in your story! makes me wonder what could have been on the show...