hello! i am very very sad for takeshi y like him!but i love kyoya!and the idea to see a jealous kyoya it is very fun and interesting i y wanted!

Hello! :) I think either decision is fine with me. Thank you for not abandoning this story and deciding to rewrite it! I really enjoyed it and look forward to your future works :) gambate~

I think you should make a brand new story for the rewrite.

a completely new

I really LOVE this story, please don't delete it!
I really want to reread this!
Please continue writing!

I would like you to create a new story please! I'll be looking forward to it :)

Completely new story would be pretty awesome

Err... I don't suppose I could ask for both?
Hehe...
Well, I guess do as you please.

Either is fine, as long as you put a post in this one whichever way you go

I want you to create a completely new story because i like this story and don't wish it to be deleted. Whatever you do don't delete this story.

I truly enjoy the way you portray romance, especially with Hibari involved. It's cute and the closest thing we can get- I'm conscious of your efforts to keep Hibari in character whilst pushing the boundaries of him being 'in love' or 'soft'.

Yamamoto's feelings do seem a little irrational at this point (then again, when are emotions ever?) But you've definitely clearly conveyed that he's beginning to see the key aspects of Sakura that would make him question his feelings for her.

From a standalone point of view, I'm a little surprised that Sakura didn't draw some parallels between a controlling Innocenti and Hibari's dominating personality.

I mean, the saying that "girls always find men like their fathers" might have truly been implicated in this case. I find the notion insanely weird in reality, but I guess for a fictional piece... Eh.

As for your writing style- I love it!

You artfully paint scenarios that hold just enough detail so that twists aren't unfathomable. I especially enjoyed the bait you threw in with Yamamoto and Sakura's "feelings".

Dear author-san,
I love your story! The love triangle between a quite normal girl and 2 appealing guys is extremely refreshing. The bitterness in Sakura is also very touching. Absolutely adore the banter and sarcasm between her and Hibari.
Thank you for your story!

Damn wtf did he do to her. Lol anywhoo love the story so far keep it up

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
SO amazing! !I really hope for more scenes where it's totally Hibari x Sakura in public view~

WOAH THEY NEARLY KISSED WAH TAKESHI PLS!
I'm kinda thinking that its only takeshi that is showing romantic affection to sakura. Hibari isnt even sure what he feels for her. So im thinking what if in the future, sakura was won over by takeshi? Idk wow some angst there for hibari mybe because he prioritized his work and organization rather than sakjura? And maye it will be like the feeling sakura had with his father? The loneliness and all? Gah so many possibilities AND BYAKURAN I REMEMBER HIM were sakura and him friends? Hahah what if she was brainwashed that it was byakuran who saved her or smth bc u know, the quote with the savior thingy