Reviews for The One Eyed Angel |
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uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 1 . 6/3 goo o ood chp |
markshandon7 chapter 1 . 7/25/2019 I just thought of this. Since female ghouls can heal that means they can always be a vrigin when they get fucked. since it heals lmao |
TechnoGalen chapter 2 . 6/13/2019 Poorly written and it makes no sense. |
Guest chapter 29 . 3/10/2019 la suite de l'ange unique aux yeux |
DarianTerrell chapter 1 . 6/6/2018 this is fucking garbage |
kurama087 chapter 1 . 5/23/2018 I love the premise of the story but I can't get passed the first chapter because of how bad the grammar is. Once the grammar is fixed I have no doubts that this would be a fanfic that I could really get into. |
Bombertank chapter 29 . 5/8/2018 When to quick near the end. Seemed like you where rushing to finish it. |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/26/2018 can you fix the grammar? switching from past to present makes this confusing to read |
lszl chapter 28 . 4/20/2018 could you please write in simple past? |
zehendner chapter 29 . 4/5/2018 I finally finished reading all of this can't wait to see what else you do |
SPark681 chapter 28 . 4/4/2018 Nice story to bad Naruto wasn't able to save Touka anyways keep up the great work! |
iBunnyKing chapter 29 . 4/4/2018 Yea i saw it |
Deamonarch71 chapter 28 . 2/28/2018 I can only express myself in one word astounding |
Guest chapter 9 . 1/24/2018 H-hey your story is great but one question do you take request? |
kuroakuma999 chapter 10 . 12/27/2017 I loved your story... when I can make the corrections to your grammar in my head. Sorry to say but your grammar was so bad in this story that I actually had to stop because it was giving me a headache trying piece the right words and sentences together. |