Please don’t drag on quinn hating Rachel

OK this is a nice story. I just hope you don't drag the Quinn constantly blaming herself extra and cutting out friends out for to long. It may be more realistic that way. But I doubt it will make people want to read the story all the way through. A story that is all tragedy and no joy is not a popular story for people to read. Besides if you keep Quinn on this hating herself and isolating herself it would not make it believable for her to get better at all. If she keeps going down the path you have her on much farther the only way this story would have a logical ending is if she committed suicide. If that's what you have planed than I hope you let me know at least. Cause I will not read a story of that type. Life has enough tragedy in it without subjecting ones self to that type if story when you actually like and care about a character.

This story gutted me. Hope for an update soon and hopefully one with respite my god haha
Well done!

First...as heartbreaking and angsty as this story is, I love it.

The adults in this story REALLY need to step it up for Quinn, and for the Unholy Trinity [Rachel version]. Ms. Pilsbury, as a counselor, should realize that Quinn has some major self-esteem, self-worth issues, and a ton of other issues that need addressing due to the horrors that she has had to face for God only knows how long. Hell, she should have realized that Quinn needed help just in the fact that the girl had no friends. Someone needs to get these kids, especially Quinn, some help! Quinn might fight it, but she's not a lost cause and she can learn to stop believing all of that crap that Russell brainwashed her to believe...she just needs help.

I believe that Sue and her behind the scenes activities are going to play a major part in getting the idiots of Lima to realize that Russell is a very evil, sick fuck who deserves a LOT worse than jail. I think Sue's probably going to be the one who initially helps Quinn to get the help she needs. I am usually not a Sue Sylvester fan, but in this story she is a smart, caring, conniving woman who is going to do her best to help those she cares about.

Please don't late Quinn be angry at Racgel for too long, and please don't let her try very hard [not trying at all would make me happy] to push people away. She and Rachel deserve a happy ending together.

Looking forward to the next update!

Oh...by the way, I am DarkPhoenyx on AO3 and i commented originally on that site.

Cool story and I agree who ever put Murphy in charge was a moron.

Hope you update soon

There is a hole in my gut. I feel sick, like I was there watching and in a way I was watching, a very dear friend get raped. I felt angry and wrathful and I nearly vomited, not even from the description which was respectfully short and horrifically, violenty brutal. It was from the impotency I felt being forced to be an idle bystander while it happened. I wanted to talk about the respect and honesty of all the different viewpoints shown, of the brutal reality of being a survivor, being the person who betrayed the trust, a friend of the survivor and the one's who understood the fight before it started. but other than the mention here, I dont think I really need to talk about it much more. I was attracted to your work because the concept was good, and fresh, and the characters truly had some fidelity to them while still acting in your new world but the truth is you've imbued them with spirits of the show and with characters of their own that I didn't even think about. it's masterful. it's heartbreaking. It is not the duty of the talented to use their talent, but I hope you one day write something original, something to take this talent and make money from it, because I think beyond the acclaim that comes from our little world, you're talent and hard work is bright enough to burn its way through the world unabated. I truly look forward to and dread your next chapter.

That was a great chapter! Really looking forward to read more! Thanks for the update and take care.

Nice chapter!

Love it!

At least Quinn has people backing her up. She will come around eventually.

I'm glad that Miss. P is there for Quinn . I hate the media... Can't allow someone the privacy they need. Everybody is going to know in a matter of hours. Poor Quinn.

Wow. Incredible chapter. I'm glad Rachel has told her dad. Even if Quinn hate her a bit now she'll understand.

What a charged chapter. At least now they kiss. But Quinn was about to do what her father do to her I'm sure... Can't wait to see the next part.

Oh no. Love the first part of the dance.