Wonderfully written

Thank you

awwww

Oof

I really, really liked this. It was so good. I was feeling so mushy until Pepper didn't see the colours, then I was shattered, but it just made it all the sweeter when she actually did.

One tip, tho, maybe you should use scene breaks to separate all the other instances when things fell to black and white. They really messed me up and I had to reread things a couple of times before I realised what was happening.

This was amazing! Don't ever stop writing.

Beautiful story. Amazing job with this, I cannot wait o read more of your stories!

I love your story! It made me smile and definitely made my day. Thanks for posting.

Gosh this is great, my eyes started to water a couple times. And when Tony says "How can I live like this… in this colorful world, beautiful, fantastic, and magical, if Indon’t have someone to experience it with?" I think I lost it. I cried a bit there. I'm so happy with how it ended. The last line made me a bit emotional too. Great job.

This is beautiful!

This was really good, loved it. Please update soon :D

Oh i love what you have done. I love the little AU you made with it.
As always it is perfect

I wish happy new year.

I criedat that last part,where Tonys vision turned black and white. Honestly, man. You know how to give the people what they want. Would you review my new story, still on its first chapter' Broken Habituals' and tell me what you honestly think, maybe give me an idea of what you and other readers would like to read about? Thanks :) ( in advance, I hope)

This was so beautiful. An awesome description of what true love really is.
I even cried on some parts of the story because of the ammount of feelings I had.
You just wrote Pepper and Tony thoughts and feelings so beautifully.
You are the best at writting them. Awesome work as you always do.

This had me teary eyed for the most part of it. This writting has so much soul on it. I truly loved the seeing in colour part and suffered with poor Tony feeling so helpless at the thought of his love being one-sided.

And when Pepper saw in colour I just was so happy for them

Thank You so much for this beautiful story ;)

to be... ?

You've done a very good work.

The world that you've created is sad but seems to be really similar to our, and that's a good thing. Your characters are very grounded and real. The storyline is full and well-written. Special thanks for an amazing description of feelings.

Thanks for your breath-taking story. I really like it.