Ye, fuck this shitty ass fic

A great original concept and I like your charakter buildup and their interaction better than canon Naruto/Sasuke/Sakura.

I have read fanfiction for a long time. This is one of the best, most original works of FF I've ever read. The character dialogues, the story, divergences, original ideas, logic, everything is perfect. Thank you for sharing this story with us

Please come back this story is amazing!

You have an annoying habit of saying a certain x to describe characters, instead of just saying their name. Just say their name.

This story is simply the best I've ever read in my life, no exaggeration, seriously, a pity that you did not continue it

Dude. That is a pretty good name for that farm. Seriously, "Not Awarded" farm? Nice.

This is a great story!

Darn shame it was never continued...

I knew something was off! The proctor hadn't said anything about how Temari won such as Winner by knockout or Winner by forfeit. He just said Winner. Technically, Temari has only won when Sakura has fallen unconscious, forfeited the match, or has a comrade interfere. Without that, the match is fair game.

The proctor didn't say how Temari won so something felt off.

I Loved This so Much! the emotional rollercoaster of Angst and Fluff with a good measure of action was beyond Compare! and Naruto gets to be happy so overall I wish you keep up your MARVELOUS WORK! This was Excellent!

Posting this here since you can’t say more about the same chapter (which is stupid!). So this is more related to chapter 30, than 29.

I also think that the logical and practical thing for Naruto to do would be to ask Killer-bee to help with his now permanent Bijuu body so he can atleast be able to interact more with the people he cares for. Since Garaa, and Yamato are dead, (‘sad face’ :( ) it would be the next best solution.

Damn it! You missed a funny moment you could’ve done if they sent someone else with Naruto as the muscle to get Tsunade to be the Hokage! I can see her screaming in terror as he shows himself to the town and lifting up the roof of the casino/gambling area she’s in and getting a face to face meeting with the most powerful person in Konoha to date!

And as she’s screaming his tails wrap around her arms and legs, saying “You’re coming with us! Whether you like it or not!”
As he leaves, with Tsunade screaming swears and promising pain upon him when she gets free, Shizune and Tonton hurry after with whoever came with Naruto to give Tsunade the offer of Hokage.

Seriously that would’ve been hilarious! The most powerful woman on the planet rendered powerless and helpless and she’s dragged back to Konoha by the infamous Kyuubi! Why hasn’t someone done a comic of that idea yet or something!? XD

i really enjoyed the first half and cant wait for the next one

Can you pretty please write more