I didn't remember the name of this 'fic, but I did remember a sufficient amount of quotes to find it in a search. So, good show posting it on a forum where I could find the title. As I've remembered it fondly after all these months, you've earned yourself a fave.

Ah, that mean ol' witch. Well done. I don't see a problem with the pair's end. Skyrim is pessimistic towards man's ability to break the cycle of vengeance.

So I have to know: was it the Dragonborn who killed her, or was it Ulfric?

It's good. Solid way to move forward.

Very well written! Especially the character parts!
I love these kinds of fics, where both sides are looked upon on the same level of balance, no complete good or completely evil.
Can't wait for more of these!

That was really good. I really like how you balanced it and showed both sides as having both good and bad points. Most stories I've seen they've tried to paint the side they don't support as completely evil.