Although I liked the story, I don't think Ziva would intentionally be irresponsible especially to Tony or Gibbs, she liked both of them. But I understand we all have characters we like more then others.

Ziva's belief that as a former Mossad agent she knows best and doesn't have to follow NCIS procedures almost got Tony killed. Gibbs should have stopped covering for her years ago.

a nice story...
it's good that Tony is recovering :)

beautiful!

Great job!

Awww how sweet

Nice story. Very well done. Thank you.

Great story

Need slash warning

Gibbs' strong, deep love for Tony brought him back to life. I love reading stories like this!

Great story. Loved the back info about Shannon and Kelly and how Gibbs used that to help Tony. I liked how he was willing to let Ziva go and save Dorney. My favorite line is this one..."Convenient loyalty is no loyalty at all." I felt sad for Tony learning Ziva never showed up at all. While it was sweet how all his friends came to see him from Abby and the bowling to Jimmy reading to him. Wonderful story hope to read more soon.

Good story.

Wow. This was so chocked full of warm and fuzzy imagery. I am such a sucker for H/C fics in general and it was hard to tell at times which one of them was hurting and which being comforted. You described the whole skin to skin thing so perfectly I honestly felt like I was in bed with them.
I really enjoyed how you wove all of the team in in little bits which so suited their characters and Tony's reaction to hearing about their visits was just totally real and organic.
And the end...art imitating life? The parallels were certainly clear enough!
Thank you for writing! Great fic!

saw this over on AO3. wish i could have given it a million kudos. excellent. just excellent.

Perfect. Ziva is the worst. I loved this fic!