Oh so sweet thanks for a very good read

Sequel? Maybe a multi chap? ? Pretty please?

I liked it...and I hope you write more chapters.

J'avais la flemme de laisser une review en anglais puis j'ai vu le "english isn't my first language" et je suis aller te stalker sur ton profil pour savoir que... TU ES UNE FANGIRL FRANCAISE ! ALLELUYA ! (- oui je sais ça ne s'écrit pas vraiment comme ça)
Brf, revenons à nos moutons héhé, j'aime vraaaaaaaaaaaaaiment beaucoup ton OS ! Cela faisait très très longtemps que je n'avais pas vu un écrit si... si...iojeijfeijeoijg quoi ! Ce n'est ni OOC ni trop larmoyant/cucul la praline ( je ne sais pas si tu connais cette expression, beaucoup de gens me regarde avec de ces yeux quand je la sors !) Brf, c'est vraiment parfait, enfin pour moi, ça m'a vraiment redonner le smile, moi qui n'était pas très en forme !
Grâce à toi je vais faire de joliiii rêve Meeerci

J'espère que tu posteras d'autres écrits et assez rapidement !
Bonne continuation et Bravo !

P.S : Désolé pour ma probable "fofollitude"

Great story! Only spelling error..its bent over to kiss her lips. I think you showed how Teresa was happy with their relationship and wasnt pressuring Patrick for more but the more he thought about it Patrick wanted to increase their level of commitment to include babies. Well done!
Sugar

wonderful, thank you so much and pleace continue soon!

very good story ..thanks .

This is wonderful! Please write more. :)

I absolutely loveddddd this. And you cannot tell that english is not ur first language. English is not my first language either. I have been dying to read something like this. :') i absolutely loved it so much. Thank you for writing this.

This was a sweet story, and your English is excellent! The only clues I had that you are not a native speaker are very tiny mistakes: we would say 'still had' instead of 'had still', 'bent' instead of 'bended', and 'getting out' instead of 'going out' of an argument. Your story is very well done! I hope you keep writing stories in English so I can read them.

Enjoyable...and realistic. It seems like this is the direction that would make the most sense for them to go. Loved it!

I think you did a great job of getting to the meat of the discussion they have been dancing around. It's obvious they're trying to feel each other out with the other discussions they've had lately, at some point they need to get direct like this.

beautifully written story.. I enjoyed it

This was lovely. I really enjoyed it.

Totally adorable! I like that you had Jane be the one to bring up babies rather than her! Very sweet! I want to see them have this conversation! Just a quick note, maybe see if you can find someone to beta your stories because some of the verb tenses were a little off. But I loved the story! Hope you write more!