Reviews for Young Forever
willowfaust chapter 23 . 8/13/2019
Srsfan chapter 23 . 2/10/2019
Thank you so much for writing this! I couldn’t stop reading. I wanted to read a book about a love story between Edward and Jacob! It took some very surprising turns, some I was really unsure of, but I’m a sucker for a happy ending and I really appreciate all the time you put into this story. Keep writing!
MySweetEscape chapter 12 . 4/9/2017
Darn! I thought we'd gotten out of dealing with Rosalie and Emmett. Doubt I'll warm up to them.
Tia chapter 10 . 10/3/2016
WOW! Just Wow!
Guest chapter 3 . 3/1/2016
So Jake is coming around...I wish that Bella would stop trying to be in the popular group
Guest chapter 2 . 3/1/2016
So relieved that Seth is still alive
Guest chapter 1 . 3/1/2016
Okkkkkkkkk...I'm feeling this story. There doesn't seem to be any supernatural essence in this story, but I will continue to read on
yukino76 chapter 23 . 2/18/2016
good ending it's great what Rose has done
Eat my Words 4 me chapter 23 . 2/15/2016
Great story yet again. Thanks for sharing and I loved the ending very much. Funny Paul's sons are both gay. :)
lytebrytehybrid88 chapter 23 . 2/15/2016
Such a beautiful bittersweet ending.
Qmagic chapter 5 . 1/26/2016
This chapter was kind of sad. It was so intimately written, it's like I could put myself in Edward's shoes and feel what he was going through with all of his struggles and insecurities, It was painful just reading all of Edward's feelings and thoughts on his illness and I suppose it's all starting to hit home for him now that his condition is progressing and really affecting him now. It's just not fair, he's so young and he deserves to be happy. I understand he doesn’t want to bring people into his life only to say goodbye but that's the point of life. You never know when your time is going to be. Even a perfectly healthy person could pass tomorrow, but the point is you live life to it's fullest everyday and love, laugh, live as much as you can everyday. Jacob on the other hand was so cute this whole chapter. The whole date was just beautifully written. I knew from the start that Jacob knew what he was doing when he first told Edward everyone had bailed on him. He's really starting to care deeply for Edward, Edward just needs to open his eyes to see that he needs Jacob, he needs people in his life to help him through this. I really hope their relationship doesn't get worse from this point onward. I know Edward has his reasons but hey, he is stupid for trying to say no to Jacob and backing out of what could potentially be the best thing that ever happened to him. Hoping for the best for these two! As always, amazing work! :)
Qmagic chapter 4 . 1/24/2016
Okay, I'm back! Sorry for the absence. Things pick up a lot in this chapter and I'm excited about it! I'm sure there are a million songs under the sun to describe this very situation that Edward and Jacob are in at this point in the story. Edward's inner monologue is adorable, when he asked himself, am I crushing on the jock? I busted out laughing, of course you are Edward, how could you not? It was the perfect setup. Lol. Anyway, I loved Jacob's character here because more and more of who he really is, is being revealed and you can really tell he's trying to grow into a better person. But it was so cute and fun reading how Edward is trying to convince himself that he wasn't bothered by their quarrel or that he does like Jacob in the slightest bit. Great work!
Guest chapter 22 . 1/16/2016
Cant wait for more!
Romantific chapter 22 . 1/13/2016
I almost cried at the end. I can't wait for the next chapter. At least Aro and his goon squad are dead. Lol.
MaliceMalAmyMalevFaery chapter 22 . 1/13/2016
Amazing chapter. Continue writing this masterpiece. :)
Please bring Bella again the story.
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