Enjoyed this very much. Great concept and enjoyed the story. Th a,ks for writing and sharing!

Miss ur brilliance here :(

My heart's all warm and fuzzy feeling...
Oh my god! The feels are causing my eyes to tear up!
:)
Thank you!

Loved reading this wonderful, feel-good story on Mother's Day. Thanks for sharing.

I really like this story. It's a good story. Even there's only two chapter. I can't believe i didn't read this sooner :) i always jump to the long chapter i didn't realize this short two chapter is worth reading! :D

I love this so much. It just feels good, y'know? It's that dreamy, happy sigh kind of good that for a moment makes all the shit around you just melt away. I wish I could just jump in and live in their world. Thank you for that.

Sadly this amazing ending will only happen in fiction. Thank you for this. Was looking for something to read to make me happy and this did the job!

This was beautifully written. Part of that beauty is that it was simple and honest and direct. And I loved that it was a delightful cohesive package with the right amount of detail that stayed true to a central theme with a satisfying conclusion. I guess what I'm saying is that this is a great example of the power of a short story; I've seen a lot of stories (particularly baby/family stories) that are very long and although fun, can be a bit of a ramble...and we know how common it is in in the land of fanfic for long epic stories to never find their ending. ;-) This whole story was a lovely confection from beginning to end. It was touching and poignant and I loved how Bo grew as a person through her experience, and how that strengthened her and Lauren's relationship. Lovely pacing, great, effective characterization, and it had a nice polish to it. It's also the middle of the night and I'm feeling wistful and sappy so this was a most wonderful indulgence. Thanks for writing this! :-)

One word: beautiful *claps*

Thanks for sharing!

Lol this was pretty cool. Though I am shocked they don't have even more kids, cause I can't think of a condom for the way Lauren got preggo lol. This story made me smile )

Great job! It's always so good to see a passionate, caring and more mature version of Bo! I loved it, thanks for sharing! :)

I didn't know where I could leave this note, but I just wanted to say that I loved your Doccubus massage challenge one-shot "Talented Fingers"-any chance making it a two-shot or even a full-length fluffy story? It was amazing and funny and sexy, you are becoming one of my fav writers. In fact it was the only story in the challenge that was both funny and sexy. Bravo to you! And please consider writing another chapter for it, pretty please! Maybe just showing us a first date?

Awesome Fic

Sadly, only in fanfiction will Doccubus fans get the happy ending we want for our girls. This was a beautiful story and thanks so much for making it a two-shot. It really shows the "education" of Bo, the growth from where she was in the beginning of her journey till now. This, in my opinion, is her living the life that she chooses, where she isn't dictated by her biology and chooses to be with a human, a partner who keeps her balanced. I'm also a sucker for domesticated Doccubus. Thanks so much and looking forward to more domesticated doccubus in another chapter for T&T, perhaps? *wink wink, nudge nudge*

Awe sweet cheers :)