Hey Starswim,
First off I apologize for my last review. I posted it twice and it was posted for the wrong chapter. So sorry about that. Anyway, loved this chapter. Hope Kathy and Rachel will be ok. Also hoping Jim Gordon survives his encounter with Black Mask and Killer Crock. I've really enjoyed reading this story. Hope to see an update before summer ends. You rock! Also hope you are staying safe and healthy during these hard times.

You know, I had an idea that Joker could gaslight Jenny by making her think she’s going crazy by seeing dead people, flickering lights, creepy dolls, etc.

Hey Starswim,
First off I can't tell you how happy I am you updated! This was such an exciting chapter to read. I just hope Jim Gordon doesn't get killed off. Gotham needs him and so does his family. Seeing Harvey stand up to Joker was amazing! I hope Kathy won't be too hard on Bruce in the next chapter. After all, he just wants to protect her from Joker. It was nice to see the clown prince crash the vigil, and fight one on one with Batman. I'm also excited to see what will happen next to Jenny. I'm anxious to see where her relationship with Joker will go as the story progresses. I'm hoping he will make her his princess. Reading this remake has been so much fun. I can't wait for the next chapter! You rock!

Hey Starswim,
First off I can't tell you how happy I am you updated! This was such an exciting chapter to read. I just hope Jim Gordon doesn't get killed off. Gotham needs him and so does his family. Seeing Harvey stand up to Joker was amazing! I hope Kathy won't be too hard on Bruce in the next chapter. After all, he just wants to protect her from Joker. It was nice to see the clown prince crash the vigil, and fight one on one with Batman. I'm also excited to see what will happen next to Jenny. I'm anxious to see where her relationship with Joker will go as the story progresses. I'm hoping he will make her his princess. Reading this remake has been so much fun. I can't wait for the next chapter! You rock!

Hey Starswim,
OMG you're back! I'm so excited that you updated! What an exciting chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter, and find out what happens next. Hope Kathy, and Bruce will have some face to face conflict with the Joker. Also, I loved seeing more of Jenny. I hope she'll be in the next chapter too. Speaking of Joker, and Jenny, I hope you will consider the idea of Joker making her his clown princess. I really do think it would be a great way for Joker to torment Kathy even more. Knowing Jenny belongs to him could break her even more. And Joker manipulating Jenny into trusting him, and believing he cares for her would be the icing on the cake. Again, so happy to see a new update for this story. Hope to see another one before the new year begins. Keep up the great work. You rock!

Guest reader that's really is a good idea I would love to see that in this story great idea

Hey Starswim,
So glad you're back! I really enjoyed the chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. Also, please consider my idea of Joker softening up Jenny to make her his clown princess. I know Joker being kind, and loving to Jenny would be out of character for him. However, I think it could work in this story. I also believe Joker forcing Kathy to watch Jenny become his bride would be a great way for him to carry out his revenge on Kathy. Nothing would break Kathy more than knowing her sister would belong to him forever, and that Jenny would not only be Joker's partner, but also be made to give birth to, and help him nurture a new generation of chaos. In other words have his children.
Please, please, please, consider the idea. Hope to see another chapter soon, and good luck with continuing the remake. You rock!

Great chapter. Keep up the good work.

Hey Starswim,
Loving the remake so far. Super intense Joker, and Jenny scene. I had a few suggestions for the Joker and Jenny's relationship.
After Jenny learns her lesson, Joker decides to soften her up, by being kinder to her. He gives her better food, he also gives her a bath,clothes that fit her well, gives her a more comfortable place to sleep, and takes her on a few romantic outings for two. During this time they grow very close, Joker shows her affection, and he also gives Jenny a special piece of jewelry. Jenny eventually, returns the affection, and they soon find themselves falling in love with each other. The purpus is for her to trust him, so he can make her his clown princess of crime, and for her to also give him children to carry on his legacy. But she is unaware of this until the night of her indoctrination, a special event that will officially make her his princess. The event is very much like wedding, since she will belong to the Joker forever after the ceremony is performed by the mad man, and his minions. Batman, and Kathy are invited to the indoctrination, and must attend it to save her before it's too late.
Hope you like the suggestions, and good luck with the remake.

YOU'RE BACK! OMFG I CANT BELIEVE YOU'RE BACK! I have loved this series so much and for a long time I thought you had gone on infinite hiatus. I’m so excited and can’t wait to see what you have in store. I love you so much!

I had some suggestions that could happen. The joker could lock Jenny in a sweat box having her almost die of heat exhaustion, almost sweats to death, and he could tie her to a wheel barrow which is above water and uses a lever to dunk her in the water multiple times and the water is freezing.

This story is amazing! I love it and I also think you should write a Red Eye fanfic.

Really, really intense chapter. Poor Jenny. Anyway I have a suggestion of what kinda torture/games the Joker could do to Jenny. He locks her in a meat locker and turns the liquid nitrogen on almost freezing to death and tells her in the speakerphone that she has ten seconds to get out or she’ll die. She somehow finds a chair and successfully breaks out.

I have some suggestions and ideas of what Joker could do to Jenny. So since she’s in a bedroom, she finds a way to untie herself and uses a Bobby pin to unlock the door, and she runs out through the hallways and knocks out one of the goons and sees a back door and finds it open and she pushes it open and when she’s outside, she finds that she is fenced in and finds that fence is electric and the Joker plays the song “don’t fence me in,” by Bing Crosby and speaks into the speakers that she’s been a bad Girl and she needs to be punished. He turns the lights off and locks the door and leaves her out there for days with no food or water. He eventually lets her in speaking into the speakers that her punishment is over.
Joker could also have Jenny in one of the torture rooms and she finds her hands tied above her head and her feet are dangling and Joker uses a whip and whips her multiple times and then brands her with the letter J on her side of her stomach.
Joker could also knock her out with sleeping gas and when Jenny wakes up, she finds herself in a morgue, lying on a cold metal table, naked, and her naked body is covered in a white sheet. Joker sends Kathy a picture on her phone of Jenny lying unconscious in the morgue to tell her to stop looking thinking she’s dead and it breaks Kathy more, leading her to an emotional breakdown.
When Jenny is confronting joker in the bedroom telling him she is not his doll and he grabs her by the throat and slams her against a wall and starts choking her and gives her long speech that she belongs to him and such and Jenny is struggling for air and when joker is done with his shpeel, he lets her go and she coughs and gasps for air and The Joker leaves and locks her in the room and Jenny curls into a ball and cries.
Another suggestion is that Jenny somehow passed out in Joker’s bedroom coz the Joker drugged her by putting something in her water when she got thirsty and when she wakes up, she finds herself covered in blood. (It’s actually fake blood.) She panics, thinking she had killed and hurt someone and goes to the door and finds it locked and finds a camera and asks “what did you make me do?” I hope you like and consider these suggestions. I would love to see them happen in this story. Keep up the good work.

Yes! Please continue! I need this story in my life! Also, I love that you write well-developed chapters. They pair perfectly with a cup of coffee and my favorite blanket ;)