luke riding blackjack is insulting, especially since in the sea of monsters blackjack hated luke, and really percival?

So Rachel's next huh? Neat. Also getting kind of confused didn't whacko Grover kill A.U. Leo or whatever? P.S. Wonder why the villains are so obsessed with P.J. and LV?

Just saying you said to look for grammatical errors... I found some. When you have the characters say something like "and grab that" you put "and, grab that". There doesn't need to be a comma in those spots

Amazing chapter! Love itsoo sooo much! Keep writing!

Interesting... I'd vote, but there are already chapters after, soooo... Yeah. I'd vote for Calypso, since she's the one Leo would go after first, and he is the one setting the machine up. Percy, of course, would be a little mad he didn't get Annabeth.

Hmm I really like your book so far but I feel that you made Poseidon and Hephaestus a little too caring... it’s hard to wrap my mind around the fact that they were hugging... anyway, keep up the good work!

So Calypso is next, at least that's what I get from the ending. Also I meant why didn't you save Will for the Nico arc? I mean they're lovers.

That was very strange.

That was very confusing.

Jesse is creepy.

AU Annabeth is scary.

AU Annabeth is like Thalia.

That was different.

The masked guy is messed up.

AU Apollo loves Leo.